Souls Want Revenge (Story)

Chelsea got up after James struck her and she fought against him. Trying to get him to settle down. she never thought that she would concieve a child that would be James'. He threw the chair out the window and then charged at Chelsea brandishing a sharp silver knife. James then threw the knife as Chelsea turnedto protect herself. the knife made contact with her pale delicate skin and made red and black blood leak down her back.

At the same the same time her soul shattered to the floor and crashed to the hard floor. the last movement in the glass was the sight of a tear forming, then dripping down her face. the tear was of a deep crimson.

Shattered Souls of Yesteryears came to the scene. A girl lay there with a blade in her back and only the handle visible to the mortal eye. the eldest, Terry, picked up the pieces except for the one with a red tear in it.

The Souls left that for the girl to leave her mark on the world...

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  • Zaedyns Mommy
    March 23, 2007
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    This was really interesting and good. I really liked it. Well done.


  • Dirty and Broken
    March 15, 2007
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    i am sooo confused...


  • Hinata-is-me silver member
    February 28, 2007
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    Short

    short but so so so good it reminded me of you old name Shatteredsoul13

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • HeartbrokenVampire
    February 24, 2007
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    wow!!this is really good!!i love it!