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Chapter 1: The beginning
"Whoa" I could feel everything.
Eclio, a virtual MMORPG Had just been released, and I was the first to hack into it.
I reached up and felt my ears...pointy. "Wow, what to do first..?" I kept talking to myself, it was starting to become a habit. "You should really go get a weapon!" I spun around to see the biggest human I've ever seen, (Well, NOW he was big)
"Hi there, I'm Zack." We shook, and I felt like I was going to fly off into space. "Hello, I'm uh...Do you want my game name or real one?" "Either will do," he replied. "Well, I'm Raphiel." I said and smiled.
He laughed. "Knew to Eclio, aren't you?" Could I trust him? If anyone knew I hacked the system, I could go to Prison... "Yeah," I said. "Well...First you'll need to get a weapon, then speak to the...What class are you?" "Archer" "Ok, then speak to the Arching master." He seemed in a hurry. "Ok, I gotta go, I'll talk to you some other time." He dissapeared.
"Well he was alot of help..." I kept talking to myself! Well, I guess I need to go find a bow, but where's the weapon store? I started walking towards the city, there was a big sign saying "Cindia." I guess this was the starting city.
Hmm...A building with a sword on a sign, another with a beer keg, and one more with a sheild... I guess the sword one it is!
I walked in and was amazed at all the blades, axes, and spears hanging on the walls. "Whad'you want?" A short stubby man with an apron on asked me. "Uhm, I'd like a weapon please, sir" The man's eyes grew huge and stared right at me. "SIR?! HAVE YOU NO MANNERS?! I'M A BEAUTIFUL YOUNG WOMAN!!!" She yelled and ran upstairs. "I'm sorry ma'am!" I shouted upstairs "It was a little tongue-twister!" I lied to the best of my abilities. "You're very beautiful!"
I'd never seen a woman dash down stairs so quickly in my life. "REALLY?!" She asked me. "Of course." I tried to sound polite. "So what can I get you today?" She asked me. "Uhm, I'd like a bow please ma'am." "Arrows too right?" She seemed confused. "Yes, of course." I replied. "Silly old me" I tried to smile.
Was I glad to get out of there. She gave it to me for free amazingly, saying thanks for the compliments. I still had 10 gold pieces left.
I decided to go to the armor shop before I visited the trainer. Luckily, this person was a Wood Elf like myself. "Hello!" The man seemed very happy. "What can I get you today?" "Uhm, some pretty light armor, but quite strong please..." "Ok! Here you go," and he handed me the armor, and I left.
Now, for the trainer. This should be fun. Whatever.
Please tell me what you think, I'd really appreciate it.
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No, It is not a real MMORPG...
Lol...What MMO do you write about? I might play it.. -
'Ello Damon 8D This is your Strawberry Queen. I hate storywrite. And I'm on it just for you and your sis <.<
This should be interesting O.o You've already got psychotic spazzy shop keepers and overly hurried players. O.o The characters you've used are quite interesting to say the least.
I can't say it didn't catch my interest. I do want to see what will happen <.<
Hmm...I think it'd be interesting to watch you grow as a writer-boi ^_^
Oh, and I have a community on allpoetry.com, if you'd like you can make an rp wiff me on there. It's just where we make one long story together. Allison might do the same so she can join in wiff us or we can keep it between us. -
GREAT! This is the start to a wonderful Role Play story and I am anxious to see the rest. Welcome to Storywrite from me and the rest of the greeters. I liked how you sort of set a story within a story. You have the main character of the story..who is hacking the system..then you have the actual character within the system. This is a very complex setup and shows great talent in writing. Great job and I am really looking forward to chapter 2
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Welcome to Storywrite
This is an interestingly written piece of fan fiction. I have never heard of the game, it definately perked my interest. I like the concept of a hackers impression of the game and the feel of a new person enterring a gaming world that is new to them.
I write some fan fiction around an mmorpg that I play regularly and I am glad to see another writer doing the same. Just curious, is it a real game? I couldn't find any thing on the net, but then again, I may not have proper search terms to pull it up.
You have a typo here and there, although I cant remember where I saw them. Of course, that is a good sign because the story kept my attention over any typos
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coolies so far, bro.
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