Need

Do you know what we need?
Do you care what we need?
We don't need your money
we don't need your things
We don't need your time
We don't need someone that ACTS LIKE they care
We need YOUR LOVE
We need someone that will not run
We need someone to talk to
We need a real family
We need real friends that will not talk behind our backs
We need your suport to help us though this living hell

I dont care wat you think but i would like to hear it any way

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  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    April 26, 2007

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    This is true. Well, mostly. WE DOE need money for some things, but it should NOT be the center of our lives... we DO need love and people to love us....

    Nice poem you've penned here ^_^ Thank you for sharing it with us


  • austins grl
    March 3, 2007

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    hey grl i luv it an i agree wit it i will always be here 4 u an i will never talk behind ur back unless im saying how much i luv u an how awsum u iz!


  • Zaedyns Mommy
    February 21, 2007

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    I thought this was really good....
    it seems as if there is alot of anger in here and the way you expressed your emotions was marvelous....good job. I can relate to this incident so much


  • Dirty and Broken
    February 20, 2007
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    'support' not 'suport'
    very good...
    but, honey, what's going on?


  • tjj
    February 20, 2007
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    well the background thing didn't want to work right so ur stuck with red sorry

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