The Promise and the Fall
Those sweet words
Dripping
Lingering
As they meet my ears
They fall
Blurring in and out
Stirring
Mixing with my own thoughts
Oh, my reflection
Speak to me
-speak
Author notes
Um...anchovies!!!
Please tell me what you think
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OOh
Wow oh wow. What do I not like about this? I was drawn from line to line...reading...captivated by your words. Wow oh wow. I'm speechless.
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lol, thank you, very much. lol.
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This is......
This is really good and I really, really enjoyed it a lot. Its very different and thats what I like about it good job -
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thank you
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Hm..it's different? But good...in a way. I think...?
lol
It's good just...eh...*doesn't know*
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thank you...
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lol... u make the weirdest poetic things seem so cool!! *Jealousy!!!*
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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basks in the shinning jealousy i've caused in you...now, i'm better ^^
lol, thanks for ze comment
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i do not understand....
it's good though.... -
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neither do i...i just wrote it...O.o
thanks for ze comment^^
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