"Rouge, this will need more time for the counciling," Mrs. Dowtry, trying to comfort my tears.
"I was the one who said no, I told him to leave. I don't believe that he will."I told her everything. Derrek was suspended and I was let off since I was the victim.
"I try to fight but it doesn't happen like that. I always end up getting hurt."I have been in counciling for 3 years and still nothing.I still hurt inside.
The night chills made my back tingle in the cold. It is exposed to the cold while I fill a glass of warm water to pour down my back. Wiping the blood away. My thoughts are racing trying to figure out what has hapopened again and why. Suddenly I looked in the mirror to see my once crystal clear blue eyes turn slowly to a shade of maroon darker than the ocean, deeper than the sea. I have to look away before I get lost.
I wrapped the towel around my shoulders and walk to my dresser to get into my PJs. A light blue tank and a pair of black shorts. I slide the tank over my head, then pull on some Victoria's Secrets' and my shorts. I then climb into the cold sheets of my bed. They soon get warm. Then I drift off to sleep.
I see a man in dark clothes walk down a hall and up to a room where the light is none too bright and the features of the man are now visible.Dark brown hair, deep black eyes, pale skin and narrow nose. He has something in his hands. Chloroform. He takes the chlororform and wraps it around my face blinding me and making everything go darker and darker untill there is nothing left to keep my eyes open for.
I wake up to see the same face in the dream. He has nothing in his hands and then asks,
"Do you know who I am? I am the Prince of Vampire. I need a Princess and I have been thinking of you." He said with a little embarrassment to his title...
Author notes
The initiation is about to begin. please kepp to your seats.
A contest entry
- Romance, Demons and Angels. by kkz2343.
180 points, ended February 25, 2007, 9 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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god dammit.
haha i hope to read more, i wanna find out what happens..
anyways, best of luck in the contest! -
A CLIFFHANGER?!!! Poo...
I want to know what else happens!! This is really good!
Good luck in the contest and write more so it can read!!!!!
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perfect like the 3rd one or 2nd
i think if you keep this up you will be one of the best writers on sw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yay

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This is really good. I think it is cute that the Prince is embarresed. I hope you write more to this story because it is starting off really well.




