I'm Begging You to Kill Me Softly

kill me softly
could it get any easier than that
press a pillow to my face
kill me while I sleep
put a shotgun to my temple
and don’t forget to pull the trigger
slit my wrists down the road
I swear that I'll comply
hang me from the tallest tree
that you can find in this damn town

or…
you could slip pills into something I’m drinking
or my last meal of the day
make sure there’re lots of drugs
in your food of choice
and I’ll be sure to die
taint your lips with cyanide
and rest them on my own
cut me with a razor
soaked in gasoline
use kerosene to light me up
burn me to the ground
take a sterling silver spoon
and peel away my skin

I’m begging you to kill me
so why do you just stare?

take me to the ocean
and feed me to the sharks
hold my head beneath the waves
and wait for me to breathe
bash my hair through my skull
with a hammer from the shed
or sever my fingers, one by one
and let me bleed to death

I’m asking you to kill me
could it get any easier than that?

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  • Taylor Renee
    March 2, 2007

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    wow this was really great, and realkly sad!! y did you write it? neway i loved the detail and emotion it was all really really great. btw, would you tell me who you are? lol

    Tay


  • tjj
    February 20, 2007

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    wow

    you dont no how much i want that to happen i found out alot of things i dont want to no and its all cuz of what i sed in the 1st place


  • Drac
    February 19, 2007
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    Very well written!
    And the content was genious, good going!

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 4.


  • EtherealButterfly
    February 18, 2007
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    Honey, there's no way I wouldn't like this. This is what I'm looking for...exactly what I'm looking for. I was beginning to lose hope. Thank you for bringing it back. I loved this!!! Good job!!! Consider yourself on the finalists list!


  • backdrop.silhouette
    February 18, 2007

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    ahhh...

    me like-y mucho!! lol, *pokes you until you get up*

    why arent you talking to me??? dammit!!lol

    loveage, chris...

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