Give it life

Tough, pink, soft and…limp. Fits in one hand…so small. So sad to hold it hoping it will stir...only it will not. May not ever move again. You rub it slowly wishing it would move. Then it stirs, awakens. Rolls around in your palm. You gave it life again..... 1

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...Meow.

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I can do twisty too...I wonder what you were thinking evil grin

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  • unsexypenguin
    August 6, 2004
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    Wow I Didn't See The Meow Part Down At The Bottom I Actually Thought You Were Talking About That One Part In 101 Dalmations When They Thought That One Was Dead And He Was Really Just Asleep. It Was Probably Just Me, But I Really Liked This. Great Job!

  • bambie k2004
    May 5, 2004
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    hmmm..I think that we AP people have dirty little minds...LOL Well maybe it was just me...Great Job...It was wonderful and very unique..It made me think too..Wait...I'm still thinking..LOL I wish you the best of luck in the contest..
    Much love
    Bambie


  • Meridian
    May 4, 2004
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    Brilliant!

    I'm glad you put the meow bit on the end, I was beginning to wonder what exactly that soft pink thing was - LOL! Great piece of writing, definately got me thinking with it. Well done X X


  • lisargh
    May 3, 2004
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    mmmmm well you got me lol
    a great twist, a good write
    lisa x


  • sanity
    May 3, 2004
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    Well, you got me, I was thinking what you thought I'd be thinking, great write with a wonderful twist......You are really going to get people going with this one.............

    Take care and good luck in the contest.

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