This light I hold in my hand burns bright with a light1
A light of hope and a wish I want to make2
Holding this star in my hand now I pray for my wish3
Oh how I wish I wish that my brother would get better4
He is very sick and needs your help 5
I make this wish on this star and hope that it makes it to God for his power to shine down on him6
Now I let this star go to fly to its home in the sky7
Fly fast to the heavens and give my words to my lord8
As I walk home I take one last look up with a smile on my face and hope in my heart 9
As the sun rises I wake to the phone ringing10
My mom runs in my room with a smile on her face11
With a kiss on my forehead she says your brother is going to make it 12
What did you think? Please comment!
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Wonderful story, SH! The idea of the prayer as a "light" is very creative, and so beautiful. And then, it becomes a "wish", sent on a star! Lovely imagery! Also, I appreciate that you ended this positivley. The boy recovered, in answer to your "wish." (High time God got some credit for answering prayers! lol) This is just a lovely, touching story. Great job!
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Fantastic
Fantastic Robin..you did a wonderful job with this. And I do believe that God does answer our prayers. It may not seem that way at first but one day you will definitely realize that he does listen. Great write sweety.
Alexis
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Wonderful
Amen. This is awesome!!! God answers prayers... It always hurts me when I hear somehting like this. I know you wrote this for someone else or just to write because you're the youngest... but it was great. I had a huge smile on my face when it was done.
Great job and God Bless,
Jenna
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No mater what your religion is, believing in something is what truely maters. This is a great write and I hope things continue to get better. Blessed be.
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^_^ Very good honey. I liked it. And though I dun believe in god and all that jazz..oh well
nicely done.
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I almost wish that I could believe in God like the character in your poem. It might be for a group, but it's still going to be one of my favorites on SW and AP.
Props to ya,
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Thanks for you kind words but that story is not about me it is somting I made to the group and posted it here just in case some dont see it there glad you enjoyed it though that means a lot
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Beautifully written!!!
Sector-Hunter,
This poem gave me goose bumps. I am so glad that God heard your wish. A wonderful thing to hear, huh? I'm so happy for you! I wish your brother all the best. Life is never easy, but if we take one step at a time, it will. Miracles do happen and you just witnessed one!! I send out my love to you.
Writing is good for the heart and soul.
Sincerely,
Nelak
BRAVO, SECTOR-HUNTER!!!!!!!!!
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