Last Looks

He sneered through the mask at the woman whose life he had destroyed. She quailed beneath his gaze and cried once more. Her shoulders heaving, she briefly turned away before turning back for one last look of defiance. She knew the end was near. 1

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The Warden pushed home the switch.33

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  • Arianna
    October 17, 2004
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    Hey,

    I never got around to commenting but I used your entry as a base for my story in Kylia Skydancer's contest and I got third place

    If you want to see it, it's at http://allpoetry.com/Story/715585

    -a

  • Topaz135
    July 11, 2004
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    Permission to use this in Skydancers competition is given to all. I will be off-line for a while


  • Meridian
    April 29, 2004
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    Brilliant!

    Gee that one sent a chill up my spine, well done the imagery you've achieved with this is chilling - I like it. Well done and thankyou for entering the contest. X X

  • SerenityNChains
    April 28, 2004
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    visual

    i love it...dark but honest in the emotions....very visual