She went through everyday like anyone else.
But she was never noticed.
She could have yelled at the top of her lungs and no one would notice her.
But that’s how she liked it.
Even at home she was noticed much.
Not as much as her bothersome brother and sister.
They took all of the attention.
But she didn’t mind.
No one knew.
No one.
Sure, she was sad.
But, she was used to these feelings.
Pain.
Hate.
Being ignored.
Being pasted by.
She had a secret though.
No one knew.
No one.
She loved the cuts.
The scars she made.
Self mutilated.
It took the pain away when it was unbearable.
The beautiful knife was like her friend.
As were the scars.
The cuts were deep.
No one knew.
No one.
She hid them with her jacket.
It was her favorite jacket.
Her only jacket.
Her parents never tried to get her another.
And she never asked.
The cuts started when she was thirteen.
The pain from life was unbearable.
The pain from the knife wasn’t.
It took away the pain of life.
No one knew.
No one.
Not one person noticed her.
Until that day.
The day that was unbearable for her.
There was a boy.
A boy the girl noticed.
The boy didn’t notice the girl.
The girl got the courage to talk to the boy.
She asked him what he thought of her.
He told her she was weird.
She walked away from the boy.
With tears in her eyes.
She ran home.
Crying.
The boy had ruined her.
Weird, was all she could think of.
No one knew.
No one.
She found it.
Her knife.
She made a cut.
A deep one.
She smiled.
But quickly frowned.
The pain from the boy was still there.
She made more cuts until she realized.
She realized the first cut.
The deep one.
Hadn’t ever stopped.
Blood was pouring out.
No one knew.
No one.
She didn’t panic.
She didn’t try to stop it.
The girl was happy.
For once in her life.
She knew what was going to happen.
Her vision blurred.
She felt dizzy.
The knife fell out of her hand.
And she died.
In the middle of her bathroom.
She died.
No one knew.
No one.
Her family got home.
Happy as usual.
They called for the girl.
But, the girl didn’t answer.
The family went to see what was wrong.
They found her.
Dead.
In her bathroom.
Covered in blood.
No one knew.
No one.
They saw her wrist.
It was covered with many cuts.
And one deep one.
But there was a word.
Made by the cuts.
It spelled out LOVE.
There was a question mark after it.
Her family cried.
No one knew.
No one.
They found a note.
In her room.
It was written the day before.
By the girl.
She mentioned how all she wanted was a friend.
She mentioned the knife and the cuts.
She mentioned how she was ignored.
By everyone.
But, most of all she mentioned the boy.
She mentioned everything she liked about him.
She mentioned how she loved him.
In the note, it said she wouldn’t miss anyone.
Because no one would miss her.
The note was stained.
With tears.
Tears of pain.
And sorrow.
She just wanted it to all end.
She got what she wanted.
But, not what she deserved.
No one knew.
No one.
The family was devastated.
They never meant for this to happen.
The next day at school there was an assembly.
They read the note.
And there was a moment of silence.
To remember the girl.
The girl that no one noticed.
The boy was there.
He didn’t know what to do.
He never knew words would hurt so much.
So much they could kill.
He didn’t mean for that to happen.
No one knew.
No one.
A few people cried.
Sympathetic.
She was the girl that wasn’t noticed.
Now they all noticed her now.
But, she wasn’t even there.
The students went on with there lives.
The boy forgot about the girl.
The family couldn’t
Couldn’t forget the girl.
The girl that was part of them.
But, was never noticed.
They never forgot.
But still...
No one knew.
No one.
Author notes
wow... I really like this story thingie I just wrote. Personally I think it is my favorite of mine.
^_^
*hugs*
~Pablo~
A contest entry
- Scary stories or sad stories that make me scream or cry! by Hopeh .
110 points, ended March 18, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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this made me cry
you JERK!
jk but seiously it did but i oved it
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i love it
thats how i feel
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this is probably the best thing i have ever read and will ever read......its just plainly awesome
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i love this sotry
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How do you write pain so beautifully? it was so dark,and trust me.Words do hurt like this.I would do this.If it were that bad.Honestly,i think this deserved the gold trophy in every contest you entered,because it makes me want to scream until my lungs bleed and like jump out a 3 story window or something wtf that's how much i ♥ this.
Amazing work,hun
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thank you.
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as said in the rules, no poems
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Aw sorry, I don't really think of this as a poem. Oh well.
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pangit
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Yay!!! I really liked this!!!! The flow was awsome!!! I liked how you described everything
Great job Thank you soooo much for entering and gooooooddddd Luck
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Wow this is really nicely done. You captured everything really nicely.
Great job.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
Em
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This was very good. I've overcome cutting and it's hard to do. I think that this really showed the mentallity of people who do this and you just captured it well. Good job. I really loved this.
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Thank you
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Unusual format, kind of choppy but that fits the storyline. Such a waste of life. Can't get the line number thingy to work, but you have "Being pasted by." Might want to fix that
Guess her family loved her more than she thought or was that supposed to be their just punishment for not giving her enough attention? Best wishes in the competition.
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thanks for entering this story. it's hard to read but that's ok, it's really sad. i like how you made it sort of like a poem.
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dewd. AWESOME
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thanks
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u most DEFIANTLY deserved it. Wowerz! lol.
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*cry*
OMG! Ut made me cry AGAIN but even more! Good Luck -
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this was really good i want more -
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thanks
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This is a really heavy story. I like the use of the words 'No one, no one knew'. It just makes the story more emotinal. I like this story alot.
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great work! really powerful!
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thaank you!
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Awwesome...It was written well. Kept me wanting to read more
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thanks.
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wow, I loved this. It was awesome!
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wow this was very nice good job and keep up the good work people dont realize that there actions and words can hurtpeoples feelings and this is somethings thats every one should read and think about good job i loved it
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omfg! I really liked this one! it brought out my sensitive side
lol.....keep up the good work!
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dude, that really made me cry, literally
very sad but good. post that in the group so the members can read
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i did... and it made me cry when I wrote it
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