The First Time ~ Volume II

When I finally found the strength to move again, I rolled you onto your back, straddling your chest.  Slowly I began to unbutton your shirt, nibbling and sucking on your earlobe all the while.  I had decided your shirt looked much better crumpled on the floor.  My lips met your neck, gently sucking before leaving a trail of kisses down your chest.  Your nipples were stiff and erect, anxiously awaiting my touch.  Very slowly, I circled my tongue around one, grabbing the other and gently pinching it between my fingers.  I flicked my tongue across your hardened nipple, looking deep into your eyes.  The expression was unmistakable, your eyes said, "Fuck me now."  1

A mischievous grin spread across my face as I lowered my lips to your chest again, this time to nibble on your nipple with increasing intensity.  Soon I was biting down hard on your nipple, pulling it between my teeth.  I reached down and rubbed your cock through your pants.  The sheer intensity of your erection caught me off guard, I could feel it throbbing beneath my hand.  Suddenly, I moved my head to bite down firmly on your other nipple, making you groan with delight.  2

Desperate to really get things started, I almost ripped your pants off, leaving me to stare at your boxers.  They looked two sizes too small as your cock strained against them.  I planted tender kisses all over your stomach, very gently rubbing your cock through the fabric.  My hand slowly slid up your thigh into your boxers, feeling how smooth your balls were.  You knew I loved them shaved and was never one to disappoint me.  I grinned in delight as my nails raked across your balls, they just ached for my touch.  Unable to withstand any more torture, you pulled the boxers off to release your stiff cock.  3

All I could do was sit there and stare, giving your cock and balls a good look over - clean, hairless and ready to go, just like I like them.  I started from your toes, massaging your feet, slowly working my way up your calves.  My mouth left a trail of kisses and licks up your inner thighs, I knew I was driving you crazy with anticipation.  Your fingers gripped the sheets, white-knuckled fists of fabric as you tried so hard not to grab me and fuck my mouth.  4

Finally, I grabbed your aching cock and began to lick the head slowly, thoroughly enjoying every reaction.  Your composure was quickly fading, I had you wrapped around my finger as I continued to flick my tongue ever so slightly across the tip of your cock.  My tongue travelled the length of your shaft, caressing every single inch before making its way to your swollen balls.  One at a time, I took them into my mouth, sucking gently all the while my hand pumping up and down.  I took my free hand and spread your legs wide and started to lick behind your balls, slowly inching my tongue closer to your ass, it too aching to be touched.  5

Author notes

Volume II is still unfinished...lots more excitement to cum  hahaha

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  • Catressa
    October 19, 2004
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    Whoa can't do erotic right now lol maybe later loca, Take Care going to look for another write of yours to read, Cat

  • macandrew
    September 29, 2004
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    very good

    Certainly a very graphic scene. Well written.

    thanks,
    John

  • elg1610
    May 8, 2004
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    Oh wow...I really want to read the rest of it now. That was so good.

  • Anais Elaine
    April 30, 2004
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    I wait for the next volue!! lol

  • Scream Kick Run
    April 27, 2004
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    lolz, i thought it wuz finished!! but then i looked for ur comment to see if it wuz done or not... lol, cant wait till the next part!!! good job!!! great write!!!

  • Sunkissedrose
    April 24, 2004
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    Extremely um, GOOD! I really need a cold shower after reading this, just so you know. I want to go and um, yeah do all THIS to my husband..to bad my mom is here... .. Excellent Story hon.

    Carrie

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