I did

I GAVE AWAY MY HEART FOR I CLAIMED MY OVERCOME OF PAIN..I HAD TO LIE JUST TO KILL YOU..I DATED JUST TO TEASE YOU AND SHOW YOU HOW YOU BECAME MY PAST..I ATTEMPTED TO LIVE IN THIS CRUEL WORLD AFTER I BURRIED MY HEART IN THE GRAVE AND FADED IN THE BRIGHT SHADE..YOU WALKED ON MY DEAD BODY JUST TO BE PLEASED..YOU SAID THAT YOU RETURNED TO HEAL ME BUT ALL YOU DID WAS RETURN ME BACK TO REALITY AFTER I LIVED IN FANTASY..WITH NO HEART OR GAIN EXCEPT PAIN AND FAKE, I MANAGED TO FAIL INTO THIS FAKE..I HAVE CHANGED INTO THE GREEDY ONE WHO OVERLOOKED HERSELF AND KILLED HER HEART..BUT I REALIZED THIS TRUTH AND I REALIZED THAT I'VE BEEN DOMMED..I WILL SAY THAT I MISS THE OLD ME :: OLD SARA AND MOSTLY I MISS U ..BUT IT IS A MEMORY TO LAST AND A PAST TO OVERCOME AND A LIFE TO MOVE ON..BEAT IT...WISH ME ALL GOOD LUCK ..AND I WILL DO SO FOR EVERYONE...1

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  • Nour Beydoun
    June 16, 2004
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    Ayyyyyyyy sarah this was amazing!
    Nour-

  • lseffers
    June 5, 2004
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    I agree w/ JLynn...this is a very deep write and very full of emotion. You have a great talent and i look forward to reading more of your works. A great write. Keep it up.


  • JLynn-4God
    May 3, 2004
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    Awesome

    Wow... this is a deep write. I'd love to hear the full story to it. I like the emotion that you put in your writting. It's full of it. I look forward to reading your other work.
    God Blessed,
    Your friend,
    Jenna