Tell me how you feel I can't wait
Tell me the truth thats all you have to do
Tell me that I'm the only one
Tell me that you love me
Tell me you see me with you
Tell me all the things you see
Tell me I make you happy
Tell me you feel I'm happy
Tell me please I can't take it anymore
Tell me you have hope in me
All you need to do is tell me
Please tell me what you think
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What can I tell you?
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For god skes tell her already!!!!!!
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It was sweet, and it looks like it was written with true feeling and emotion. Wow!
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SWEET!
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Great
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Awsome poem
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i liked it i thought it was very good
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Good job :]
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I got the impression that whomever you made this poem for is someone you greatly trust
I.. would like to feel this and someday tell this to someone in the near future 
haha, you turned me all in mush and fluff but thank you, I enjoyed this very much!
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I liked this Eva!
I enjoyed reading this very much!
Keeeeep writing, this was good.
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I agree with jdsk.
You have said so much in so few words. This is a very emotionally charged poem. It seemed to beg for reasurrance, and that is a thing that we all want from somebody.
Very good job, I am liking your style, and each piece is better then the last.
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I like it!
I enjoyed this poem.
That takes a lot as I am not usually a poetry kind of fella but in this case I did enjoy it.
It does not in my opinion require or need further description as it is a piece about feeling and requires feel to read it/take in the correct context.
All the best.
jsdk
beginning: 2, language: 5, ending: 4.
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awwww this is great... this person must be very special to you
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it doesn't have much dicription or anything, that wouldmake it a lot better
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