Tale of a Princess

As a young girl, I would always wonder why I never looked like my mother, and why she was so paranoid about me telling people my name.1

Now I know why. This is the story of Trilliana, the tainted princess.2

~3

When I was young, I knew my father was dead, but I alwasy wondered why my mother covered her entire body before going outside in the day.4

Everyone stared as we passed, other children calling me a deamon. This I did not fully understand.5

When I turned eighteen, my mother sat me down one night. Her eyes were blood red... I thought it was from just tears, but once I saw blood run down her cheek, I was terrified.6

"Trilliana, you are eighteen today, now you must know where you come from," she sighed softly.7

"I am not truly your mother, your mother was my sister. We are in a bloodline that... well, we're all vampires. Your mother fell in love with a werewolf. When both clans found out, they planned to kill your mother and father. I allowed your mother to claim santuary here until she had you. Every vampire, werewolf, and witch knows your name. I didn't change your name... in case your mother returned.8

"You're an adult now, you are responsible for yourself. You're on your own."9

And with that, she was gone. The only mother I had ever known. And there I sat for days, pondering who I really was.10

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  • strangeclouds
    March 14, 2005
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    ooooh..

  • liveinthesky
    February 1, 2005
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    Great Write

    I love your story...Trilli? lol thanks for the encouragement and I will take your advice surely!

  • Crying Soul
    July 21, 2004
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    wow this is a very good story! loved it very much! I thought this woul be longer is it? very interisting! I like stories about vampires and warewolfs! nice!
    Off to read some more stories and poems bye!

  • timetide
    April 23, 2004
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    Nice start. might have added more detail but its better than most things I right


  • April 22, 2004
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    wow! this does not suck at all, this is absouloutley great! even though you have already got 2 applauads I am going to appluad this aswell. Is there going to be another part? I want to find out if her mum comes back or something really good! this is really exciting!!!!!!!!

  • lovehateandtears
    April 22, 2004
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    wow. this was great! and kinda twistid!
    I think you did an awesome job, I dont really know what to say other than its good and I applaud you!

    Kayla Dawn


  • barefoot contessa
    April 22, 2004
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    NO IT DON'T!!!! You a took a very unique approach to it, and I applaud you for it. would applaud you but is out of bonus applauds

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