I looked around the black place I was in. I was very scared. What was I supose to do? I turned to Casy, she looked very, very worried. Her mouth was open but no words came out. I looked around again, I saw nothing. It was really dark, but at least I could see Casy look very scared. I wanted to laugh about that. Then again I was scared too. What was I to do? Then it got darker. I heard a scream. I wondered if the voice had taken Casy away. I hope so.
There was a laugh. The voice boomed again. "Well would you like to see your loved ones?" said the voice. "Yes," I said not knowing.
"Well let the games begin!" said the voice. I wanted to scream so badly, but I didn't. As the light began to fade even more there was a huge BOOM! I looked around even though I couldn't see anything. My heart pounded so hard I could hear it. I was hoping that I was alone. Then I felt a hand on my back. I turned around to see who it was, as the light began to come on. There behind me was the most weirdest thing I have ever seen. It was Casy! She was crying! I wanted to laugh, but I laughed in my mind.
Casy screamed. "Casy! Calm down!" I said yelling. "Lets leave," said Casy. She began to walk behind me. "If you leave this room with out doing as I request, then you shall die," said the powerful voice. Casy walked be to me backwards. This was rich! "Well what do we need to do?" I asked. "First you need to walk though this maze." said the voice. Right before me trees appered. "You must pass all the gaurds that are in the maze waiting for your doom," said the voice. "Began!" I looked though the trees, but it was hard to see where there was a place to walk. So I began walking.
Then there was a loud weird noise. I looked around me. Even behind me to see Casy look around herslef. "What do we do?" asked Casy. I looked around one more time, to see what was going on. I didn't see anything. I got scared. I started to walk. As I waked I looked around for danger. Nothing. So I kept walking. Still nothing. "Well I guess we're safe," I said looking at Casy.
Casy looked very scared. She was looking up and pointing at something. I turned around to meet my eys with a gaint. I gotten even more scared. I turned to Casy. I looked at her and, then I ran up to her to face the gaint again. "What do you think we should do?" asked Casy. "RUN!" I yelled. We both began to run as fast we could. The gaint was right behind us. I ran faster. I was really running. So was Casy. I never knew she could run that fast! She ran and ran. I looked behind me to see nothing.
"Wait, " I said. "I think we lost him," I said seeing that Casy just now stoped running. Then the gaint came out of no where and grabed me. "I hurt you good!" said the ugly, bad breathe gaint. "Let me go!" I yelled kicking. The gaint griped me tighter. This seemed familer. I looked at the gaint. I remeber now, I read a book that happend to this girl who was cauight by a gaint, and when she tickled him she got away.
I tried to tickle the gaint, but he wouldn't let me go. "Oh," I said. Then I looked down. Right beside Casy was a sword. "Casy," I said gasping, "hand me that sword!" I said trying to breathe. She gave me the sword. I looked at it's shinyness, and then I pulged the sword in the gaint. The gaint let me go as he screamed in pain. I ran before he could colapse on me and Casy. I hoped that he would fall on Casy, but she ran. "Whew that was colse," she said. I looked at the died gaint, then looked up to see the gray sky. "Yeah that was close," I said to Casy. Then there was a huge BOOM! "Oh no," I said.
To be conutied
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Its getting even better. Giants are cool!
There were a few spelling mistakes. And just a reminder to make a new line every time someone different speaks it would help a lot when someone reads it. I like it a lot. WRITE! WRITE MORE! WRITE NOW! lol *stands and claps*

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