Freedom are we really free
Heart do we all have one
If we did why are we fighting
In this war
Talk out our problems does it really work
If it did we would not be in this war
Hope do we all have hope
If we did then why do we cry
Feelings do we all have feelings
If we did we would understand
It hurts when you call someone a name
All these things we should thank about
Please tell me what you think
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Thank?
Punkchiashun...what about punkchiashun?
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GA -
If only everybuddy saw this. Then we wouldnt have so many people at school who don't have a life.
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Very thought evoking poem you wrote here. It's something that people can easily relate to. You have given people something to really think about here!
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This is a very thoughtful peice you have here, very good work and very true.
Lady Madeline -
This poem was very thought provoking and so true to.
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Hmm.. this makes me think. Particularly because someone I know told me that life would be less fun if everyone got along
That could be true, I mean... everyone would be rooting for the same team (which is impossible), everyone would be liking and hating the same shows (which, again, is impossible)... so perhaps, it lies in us, our own human nature, that everything works out the way they do... Hmm... but then, I still am thinking Thank you for this thought provoking thought ^_^
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this is very true i liked it great job
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last line 'think' not 'thank'
you should add commas in there so more people would understand without having to think too much
it's an intereting thing to think about, and something i do think about, often.
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