Wind Touched Waves

Amara watched the violinist dance her way across the stage to her orchestra of one. For a moment she could do nothing but observe the graceful teen with hair like an ocean wave. She played without faultering even as she spun into an elegent pose; her eyes remained closed as if to block out everything but the music that floated around her. As all good things do, the song ended, and the musician allowed herself to view the world around her.

"Oh! I'm sorry. I didn't notice you there," Amara simply watched her for a moment before shaking herself out of her daze. The girl had yet to leave the stage, but spoke again this time a little more nervous. "Is there something I can do for you?"

"Please don't stop. Your playing is...beautiful," The aqua haired teen blushed gently and hopped down off the stage infront of Amara. She took a minute as if to see if she was a threat.

"I'm Michelle," She curtsied and Amara smiled.

"Amara. I know this is going to be odd since we just met, but would you like to go grab something to eat?" Michelle seemed mildly surprised for a moment, but nodded in response. Amara herself was surprised at how trusting Michelle was but said nothing as she led the girl to her favorite aracade for lunch and maybe a game.

Author notes

Okay this is Sailor Moon. Doesn't start at the begining so here's the back story. It's the Crystal Millenium (NeoQueen Serentity) Uranus and Neptune were killed before its creation but were reincarnated. The whole future is kind of reworked for my purposes so yeah...don't believe the show.

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  • MDavid
    February 12, 2007

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    Sailor Moon?

    Not sure what the author notes were explaining, however, even though this is a small sample, you write well. I am sure there is a rewarding story here.

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.