The Voice of Temptation

She lay awake at nights wondering if this is all there was. Her dreams became her living. Her awakeness was her hell. She wanted to escape and run through meadows of happiness. Tears became her friend. Her eyes aged from sorrow and pain. Her heart became weak and soul became dark. 1

She turned and looked at the emptiness of her bed. He was not there. Her body became cold and her mind wondered wildly and created a guy that she longed for. While the man that was missing from her bed drifted away, she found that fantasy and dream from a voice. 2

She reached happiness again in secret. Her thoughts created an image to the voice. The image that was missing from her bed.3

She rushed into the voice and let her heart and mind soak up the pleasure of being loved. She had forgotten the image of who she waited for many nights. She confessed her love and believed in it, to the voice she had heard.4

The voice became the truth behind the image's Lie's. Soon the image she waited for vanished. Guilt started to build inside her. Confusion of what had happened.5

The voice became real. His image was known. Her fear started to rise. Her heart became torn. She wanted and loved the voice for his love yet the shame and quilt became heavy. Soon the voice began to fade and she began to look at her empty bed once again.6

The missing and loneliness tempted her. The voice intrigued her and captured her. The guilt destroyed her. The fear of losing the thoughts of her goodness killed her. She was no longer herself but her darkness and betrayal. She was the ending of herself. She lost her soul to the darkness.7

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  • Puppydog gold member
    April 23, 2005
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    fantastic!

    I don't believe that there is much to say about this one except. FANTASTIC MY FRIEND!

  • Miss Faerie
    December 2, 2004
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    To want yet fear... how can one truly understand what it is we want when we really have no idea. this is beautifully dark and well written. very thought provoking

  • Nour Beydoun
    June 30, 2004
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    The fear of losing the thoughts of her goodness killed her
    This line - i think - has captured the essence of it all..
    Great write..
    Hope everything is ok..
    Nour-

  • Whisper Mckee
    April 21, 2004
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    Dark...hope your ok