Darkest Thoughts

Set the darkest thoughts on fire,

I have no use for your truth,

Its time to realease, its now or never.

All I wanted was credit for what I put out.

I tried to kill the pain,

but only brought more.

Ive grown the gracious devils' wings

Am I too lost to be saved?

I can still hear every silent scream you make.

I want to collect your monthly blood,

and then smear it on my love.

Ive got the gasoline,

Do you want to burn in hell today?

Someone take me away,

pure and weak I suffer when I dream,

I need someone to keep me sane.

If I open my door,

will you be on the other side?

or will you forget me?

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  • Loonamist
    February 7, 2007
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    Confusing, I'm really bad at poetry. Oh well, good job though, thanks!


  • Miss South Carolina
    January 31, 2007

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    great job

    i like it i thought it was good, poetry is my passion in life so i enjoying reading it,anyways just keep up the good work