hide and seek, the story of the feelings

story of the feelings1

Upon on a time ,all the feelings in the world decided to play hide and seek, Well the one to find them all was; craziness.2

Craziness started to count one, two, etc...3

The truth hid in a clear pond, the lie under a rock, wait that is a lie, he hide under the truth were mud layered, craziness fond the Truth first, in consequence the lie two, because always the truth comes through.4

Shyness was so shy that hide inside a flower, laziness prefer not to play, he found so boring to think of a place to hide, he prefer to sleep under a tree shadow.5

Scariness was so scared that he did not wanted to play, but obstinacy convinced him to play,6

While Evie was so envious of all the places the feelings Had choose, he saw a beautiful sun flower, but he was not sure if it was cute enough, he kept moving a lot, so craziness found him.7

Gluttony hide inside a cake, but he was such a glutton that he ate all the cake, and craziness found him.8

Craziness found them all except love, he kept screaming:9

“ love, love were are you?”10

And love was on a flower with spines, he hurried up so much that accidentally poke love´s eye, and he swearer loyalty, since then craziness goes together always with love, and sees what love is supposed to see, and love is blind whit craziness.11

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  • CIndyReed
    April 22, 2004
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    thanks for the grammar correction, already change it, I apreatiated a lot what is chaucerian vernacular, sorry am from mexico u know.

  • Simple-Minded
    April 22, 2004
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    "truth hide in a " hid or hides? "fond the " fouhd? "so glutton " such a glutton? This seems to be written in the Chaucerian vernacular. I really liked the idea though!