If you

If you die tomorow will we even no
If you die tomorow would you care
If you die I would cry I would miss you
If you say good bye I would cry
If you said no don't go what can I say
If you lie and die in my arms what can happen
If you hold me till I die thank you so much
If you say you love me I no
If you love me for ever even when I'm gone thats a real love

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  • I Dare to Dream
    July 25, 2007

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    I'm gonna do what I did when I ran out of stuff to say on a series I was reading. I'm just gonna use one word to describe your poem. JUST ONE WORD, or I'm gonna need a dictionary soon.

    Anyway word one:Sad!


  • Miss South Carolina
    January 26, 2007
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    nice

    i liked i thought it was good, it was very sweet, keep up the good work, can't wait to read more

  • Dinky Di
    January 25, 2007

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    sweet poem, and true to. Sometimes all we need is for someone to say 'I love you' and to mean it! Real love is hard to find, but these words describe it so well.


  • Dirty and Broken
    January 24, 2007
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    this is very confusing, as i cannot tell who is supposed to be saying what....


  • strawberry26
    January 23, 2007

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    ol i love this it was very sweet and i cant want to read more stuff like this you do one hell of a job great job and keep it up sexy mamma

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