Round we go.

It's all right, it's ok.

I'll just look the other way.

Turn your head, crack a smile....

Wait...Am i still loved?

After what i just did.

Yes or no

Alright, I guess i'll just die alone in this basment.

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  • Blurith
    June 5, 2007

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    You have a spelling mistake on the very last word, but this is an interesting poem

    Combines humor and relationships. Reminds me of all the times boys do the wrong thing, lol.

    It's a funny read, keep on writing.

    Good work