So Cold.

As much as you have in your life

You can't take a break

to

love

me?

When did you turn? When did I turn? Have I turned?

I

N

T

O

a monster?

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  • Blurith
    June 5, 2007

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    haha, this was a little weird. I decided to read something else of yours. I'm not a big fan of this type of format, more like something you would see in public school.

    However, I guess you try different things. That's cool

    keep writing

    bye

  • Brent
    April 12, 2007

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    Short. Maybe SW ruined the formatting you were aiming for?
    And this poem reflects the very fear each person in love has. I hope things are better for you now.