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HEY..YOU HAD A VISION THRU THE OUTBREAK OF MY SOUL..YOU FIGURED OUT THE SWEET SENSATION THAT I LACK..I SUSTAINED THE GOSSIP THAT ENDANGERED MY EXISTANCE YET MY PROCEED IN LIFE..I PRESENTED SUCH LOYALITY TO EVERYONE WHO TURNED ON ME ..THEY CHASED ME TILL THE END, JUST TO ATTAIN THEIR UTMOST AND APPLY THEIR PRESPECTIVES THAT THEY THEMSELVES COULDNT FIGURE OUT AND WORK ON..I PRAYED FOR THE PRAISE TO PAY FOR THE FADE IN THE PLAY WHERE THE GREAT IS TO CRAVE FOR GRAVE..I ENROLLED AS THE INNOCENT FREAK WHO SACRIFICED FOR THE SAKE OF HER FAKE..I GOT DRESSED AS ALL POEPLE WEAR THE DECIEVING MASKS TO ALTER REALITY AND AVOID SEVERE CIRCUMSTANCES..I ATTEMPTED TO RECALL WHT I AIMED AND THT IS TO GIVE AND EXHIBIT BUT I WAS OVERHWHLEMED BY THE SAINTY THT HAS BEEN AROUND..KNOCKING EVERY HEART AND SOUL,ITS PURITY COULDNT AFFORD ITS PROGRESS..HEALING AND SAVING OTHERS WAS THE SLOGAN THT I FOUNDED MY BEDROCKS UPON....AM WAITING TO FADE IN THE SHADE OF THE BRIGHT DAY...1

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  • zeltria
    August 25, 2004
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    hmmm.........
    well there is much emotion in this one. i can't seem to find the right words here. i can certainly feel the pain and rage and can certainly sypathize.
    sorr! it's all i've got!