Bardock's Revenge [ Fic in progress]

Bardock's Revenge

by : Robert Rumery

The fate of Bardock's life hung in the balance. An evil smirk came over Freiza's face as he gatherd up some of his energy, and a large red energy ball glowed on the end of his finger and he launched his large red energy ball at Bardock and there wasn't anything that the father of Kakarott could do.

Except try to absord the blast into his chest but he knew that would just kill him, Bardock put both of his hands up trying to contain the blast with his own Saiyan energy, but that didn't work and the blast sent Bardock hurling into endless space.

The energy started to burn his skin as he floated off into endless space. There was a small explosion, it sounded like a small sonic boom. And than Bardock fell onto a small planet, it was all blue and cold it was probably an ice planet, Bardon's Saiyan armor all torn to shit and he was bleeding heavily and he couldn't use his right arm and he held it as it bleed out onto his left hand.

"Where Am I?" Bardock asked himself as he continued to walk on this new planet. The pain shot up through his arms, legs and chest and he closed his eyes tightly and tried to ignore the pain as he kept on walking looking for somekind of housing or a place to rest, he made it to the side of a frozen river and than he fell to his knees.

"So this is how I'm gonna die.. I'm gonna freeze to death." Bardock said as he closed his eyes, and as he did this the world went dark, and than he feel over and blacked out from all of the pain that he was feeling. The situation looked really grim for Bardock, but he had nothing to fear Lord Frieza and his followers thought the Saiyan solider was dead and boy were they wrong,

An hours time had passed and Bardock was layign safely in a bed and there was a fire roaring in the room the Saiyan Solider than slowly began to become concious again he opened his eyes and looked around,

he didn't know where he was but he was greatful that he was alive.

"Your awake." A strange being said, it was about 4'11 and blue and it had light blue spots all over him and pointed blue ears, the being almost looked like a blue namek.

"Yes...." Bardock said with all the energy he could muster up. He was still feelilng the after effects of the energy blast from Freiza. But he had felt better and he was greatful that this little being found him and somehow dragged him to this home.

"Where am I?" Bardock asked.

"Iceriou" The strange being said. "The planet of Ice." The strange being added.

"That explains all the ice.." Bardock said as he tried to set up, as he did so. A bunch of pain shot through his body, it was a sharp pain it felt like people were shoving swords all through out his body.

The strange little being left Bardock's side and walked out into the kitchen where they had prepared a tray of food for this stranger the strange little being took the try from the side board and walked out from the kitchen and than into the living room and than into the guestroom where the Stranger was staying.

"Thought you'd be hungry." The strange little being said as he set the tray of food on Bardock's lap and Bardock groaned a little bit from all the pain, but he forced himself to smile so the little being would think he's okay and than Bardock started picking up the food and munching down the food fast.

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  • Vegeta
    December 4, 2008

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    Wow this was very good, you know you could take this to FunAdmation who knows, they might use this as the next movie who knows, great job.

    Dragon ball GT though rocks!


  • Seshat Kitty
    May 10, 2008
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    he he
    I'm obsessed with DBZ!

    good write