It's a lover's luck to have their first kiss before they are 15.
it's a lover's luck to get to be yourself in front of Him.
It's a Lover's luck to be who you want w/out being criticised.1
It's a lover's luck to get what you want when you want it.2
Why oh why can't I be myself,Why do I have to live like this.3
Why do others, that find love mention it to the ones that havn't.4
Maybe we, who havn't are waiting 'til the time is right.5
Have you ever thought " he is not the one for me, so why try to see."6
Why do you hold on 'til the last possible moment when it hurts the most?7
Maybe those lovers will think again8
before they hurt me.9
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*Silver* 11
Author notes
This only came to mind from the events of my life that i regret people telling me
A contest entry
- Another all poems (I love poems) by jtnbuck.
125 points, ended April 16, 2007, 16 entries
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this little piece is soooooooooo inlighting. I like it. keep up the good writings.
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oh this is so sweeeeeeeeeeeet
well done i love it alots
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I agree with soda
very good ppiece of work here i liked this and it was amzaing good job with this and god bless good luck in my contest
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I think.. this is a beautiful piece.
Lovers' luck.. could be a lot of things. I, for one, think that lovers' luck is mostly reliant on the luck or chancing upon that particular person... but that may be my own opinion, dear 
I don't want those lovers hurting you.. so if they do, tell me and we'll kick their asses
Thanks for sharing this, dear
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Sad
I know exactly how that feels. I'm quite pathetic in that aspect of life.
This is a great piece of writing and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
beginning: 2, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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I like it.
I think that its one of ur best peices.
In a few part its a little unrealistic.
But who cares? its writing.
lol.
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I absolutely and whole-heartedly find myself relating to this. It sounds so much like a poem that was written professionally. It left me feeling guilty that I had my first kiss before I was fifteen and that I have a nice boyfriend who doesn't make me obsess over how I look. Still, I've had boyfriends who did. And I hated it. It kills a girl, whether they admit it or not, to constantly feel they just don't make the mark.
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I liked this, it was simple but yet, woven in the words was a message of innocence, and betrayal. Great job with this piece! Keep up the good work!
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You've written an amazing poem. It has emotion and speaks the truth in someways aswell. Nice!
Shady Lane
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