Hi, I am Jenna Baker. I am a 16-year old girl from Utahmia. My favorite color is pink, and I am about to tell you about the most amazing discoveries of my life.
I was sitting in my room, like any normal teenage girl does. Doodling in my diary. Then, my sister, Lakely stomped into my room, and started babbling on about how cool it would be to have mysterious powers you never knew about, like Spider-man. I was not paying any attention to what she was saying, because, at the time, I was not at all interested in that type of thing.
So, as I sat doodling in my notebook, it sounded as if she was just murmuring, until she said, " What if you could just wish you could do something, and you could, wouldn't that be great?"
I couldn't understant why this sentence cought my attention. It was just as boring, and immature as all of the rest of the things she had been babbling on about for the past 45 minutes. I kept thinking in my mind, " No one could ever do that, that is senseless."
I could not get the thought out of my head that this was true, that someone could just wish something, and it could happen. This was not possible, but yet, I could not stop believing that it was.
I decided to experiment with it. When I was a young girl, I had always thought that the coolest power was shapeshifting. I mean, wouldn't it be totally awesome if you could just transform yourself, or anything around you in to anything you want?
So, I thought in my head, " I wish I was my little sister."
Nothing happened. Well, nothing except Lakely babbling on about what she was babbling on about before. She was turned toward the wall talking, then turned around.
At the exact moment that she turned around, she started screaming, louder than she had ever screamed before. She started saying things, when she stopped screaming, of course, ( which was about 5 hours later). She was saying what? and how?, and things like that.
Then she started sounding more mean, saying things like "Leave," and "Get away from me you clone freak."
It was at that moment that I realized that I had done it. I had shapeshifted, this wasn't just a bunch of foolishness that she was talking about, it could really happen.
"Oh no," I thought," I better transform back before Lakely calls the police."
I automatically changed back to myself, and Lakely paniced. I started to grab her in my arms, and put my hand over her mouth, so that she could not talk. Then, I told her to keep this a secret. I did not want anyone to know about it.
At dinner, I had transformed into a dog. I could not transform back. Would I be stuck like this forever?
My mom kept calling for me, and I didn't know what to do.
Suddenly, I was teleported to a place that I had never seen before. It was all gray there. All grey, except for the colorful desks, the conference table, and the giant television screen right in front of me.
Author notes
This story ties in with the Regina Simon series. Jenna is included in the Regina Simon series, in Parts III and IV, and will be included in parts to come.
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This is reallty cool alohanm! I love it! The fact that it goes with the Regina Simon series is really cool! -
Very interesting and I liked the feel that I was talking to a teenager. What I feel your story is lacking is decription. I know nothing about what your character looks like, what her room looks like, what her sister looks like. Add some description and this will be a great story.
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I already commented on this story before u entered the competition. you'll probably win first or second. I like it a lot.
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I LOVED THE STORY!
It was based on Utahmia, which made it easier for me to understand. I remember that so much. It was a fun story to make. Anways, great middle ,beginning, and ending. The characters were cool. I like how you tell that she was living a normal life on a different planet. I can so relate to her life with my sister. She always comes into my room babbling. It gets annoying sometimes(don't tell her I said that.) Anyways, back to ur story. Great story! I give it a 10/10.

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Thank you for the great comment
Thanx for the comment. I hope it is as good as what you said it is. Thanx again for the comment.
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