Gary why do you do this to me yes I think I gave in
I love you gary but you hate me I can't take it anymore
Just tell me what I need to do to make you love me
Just tell me I think you hate me cause you hate yourself
You look at me looking at you what do you see yourself
Thats not my fault I'm sorry that there is someone out
There that does love you one day you will see and you
Will relize that hey she's my little girl my kid you
Will see well bye gary
Please tell me what you think
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Utterly depressing, but beautiful. (I know I said only one word, but it isn't enough!)
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Oh nice............
HOLLY COW I'M BLEEDING!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
no really I am bleeding like crazy for scratching my scab off
AAAAAAAAAAH! I'M SOOOO BLEEDING. -
Hmm. Not bad... (i am a suckler for grammar though...commas etc..) You are a poet aren't you, LOL Dont worry, there are quite a few people who post poetry on here
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it's sweet, but kind of trails off at the end, falling out of rythem...
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that was so sweet i love it someday he will wonder why he never loved u like u loved him
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