I will

I will hold you till the day you die
I will sing to you why you lay there in my arms
I will cry when you leave me today
I will never be happy again
I will never find another love
I will keep you in my heart for ever
I will try to never forget you
I will listen when someone talks of you
I will I promise I will do all of these thing's
For you and with you

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  • I Dare to Dream
    July 27, 2007

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    Oh GOD! This is soooo sad, but soooo BEAUTIFUL. The emotion of love is very well displayed here, as it is in some of your other poems. Wow!


  • strawberry26
    January 18, 2007
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    this was so sad stop making me cry eva i love ya thou i liked this alot


  • Mai4ever
    January 16, 2007

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    This is another touching and inspirational poem. Good job. You're getting really good with these. Keep up the good work!