Manage ur life

THIS LIFE HAS NO LIMITS 1

ALL PARENTS WONT KNOW HOW TO TEACH 2

AND UNDERTSAND THEIR CHILDREN3

NONE WILL GET ME AND FIGURE OUT 4

WHT I WANT DEEP DOWN FM THIS LIFE5

AND THE ONE WHO KNEW ALL THESE LEFT ME 6

FOR MY SAKE NT TO HAVE FIGHTS WITH THEM7

ALL  MY FREINDS SEEM SATISFIED FM ALL 8

TEHIR NEEDS9

WHILE I GOT THE BULLSHIT 10

I HAVENT BUILD THE BASIC AS I HAD THE 11

OPPORTUNITY TO PUT MY FOUNDATIONS12

BUT EVERYTIME I TRIED HARD IT TRUMBLED13

AND FELL OFF 14

WELL I SAY THERE ISNT ANY LIFE WITHOUT SHITS15

AND IT WONT WORTH LIVING IF THE ONE DIDNT FACE THE SHITS 16

HELL IS WHERE I BELONG AND I HOPE I ENJOY MY TIME17

COS THT'S WHT AM PASSING THRU 18

HOPE AND TRUST ARE THE LAST THINGS I WOULD EVER THINK 19

OF HADLING THEM TO A CLOSE PAL 20

PAIN IS MY MATE THT WOULD HEAL MY WOUNDS21

TEARS ARE TEH FADE THT MY HEART CARE 22

DEVILS WILL SPREAD THEIR INTENTIONS 23

I SHALL BE THE 1ST TO IMPLEMENT 24

SUCKERS WILL BE ALWAYS LIKE BEGGERS 25

THEY WILL NEVER BE THE ONE OR CHOOSEN26

I IWLL FACE THIS WORLD WITH NO WEAPON TO FIGHT ONLY MY 27

DEVIL ACTS28

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  • RoughRider
    June 18, 2004
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    Excellent

    As for the poem the emotion in it, it comes to be very powerful. Yes a bit of grammer errors we all have them, but I get the cap's as you screaming to the world. Powerful write very powerful.


  • Pegasus
    May 3, 2004
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    not your stile sousou

    sousou shou hayda ?? shou 3ambta3emle??????
    lesh hek???? come on this is below you you can do better than that i am realy shock ??shou hada????? ya3ne 3angad shoooooo???
    what the hell is this.........??????????????????????????????????
    i hope there's a good explination....okay????? if sanaa knew about this she'll kill you so i would either fix it or del it okay???


  • silica
    April 17, 2004
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    You shouldn’t shout so loud or use text – if you can’t be bothered to write it – why would anybody be bothered to read it?