CHAPTER 1.2 of Young Love.

My second day of school was here, I was amazed by what I felt when I woke up that morning.  I was actually looking forward to school!  For the first time in seventeen years I looked forward to getting up at seven in the morning and walking my lazy ass to the bus stop, riding for half an hour and going into that hellish brick building. 1

Well when I got to school I had a smile on my face, and a warmth in my heart.  My friends were terrified because I only smiled once every couple of months.  Steven came up to me and gave me a strange look.  Maybe he thought I was sick?  I knew better, I knew I was in love.  2

Classes went by slower than ever because I was looking forward to eighth period more than anything else.  Just to see her pretty smile, her gorgeous green eyes, and her sexy body.  God it drove me wild, just the thought of her could make my eyes turn around. 3

Finally it came, eighth hour.  I was so excited I forgot to stop by my locker, I just headed straight to study hall.  When I got there I thought of nothing else other than how do I get this girl to be mine.4

After Careful consideration and planning, about two minutes, I decided that I would just be myself because myself is what always makes the girls smile.  Even the stuck up cheerleaders would flirt with me, probably to tease me knowing that I would never date them.  HA!  I proved them wrong, and you'll find out how around about chapter two.5

CHAPTER 1.26

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maybe this sounds stupid to you but its my first attempt at a story and I think its a good one.

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  • Kegger
    April 16, 2004
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    Nice, its a bit short though.. Thats the only fault but if its your first try then you're doing great! Keep up the great work, i wanna know what happens next . Take care

    KeggeR *

  • PlayLikeWeAreInLove
    April 16, 2004
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    yeah, i agree with Tu Leona...keep going, its a good start and im now curious 2 find out what will happen next, well, byez!
    ~confusedevryday

  • Tu Leona
    April 16, 2004
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    Keep going. I'm very curious. You're doing an excellent job. I want to know what else happens. By adding that last line kind of made it so the reader wants to keep going. Good job.

    ~>Tu Leona<~
    Edited on Apr 16, 1:46 p.m. because 'typo'.