Where'd you go
I love you
Where'd you go
I need you
Where'd you go
I miss you
Where'd you go
Are you scared of me
Where'd you go
Are you mad cause I'm dieing
Where'd you go
I'm all ready gone
Please tell me what you think
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You seriously broke my heart with this. It's really so sad! Do you EVER write anything cheerful??? I'll keep reading till I find out, and enjoy your other works on the way, sad as they are.
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Wow, this one got me, I couldnt help but to cry. I have wanted to say something like this to my father for so long, but I can never seem to get the words right.
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cool. this also reminded me of the song by fort minor >.< thats actually why i clicked on it in the 1st place. anyways, cool little poem, gj.
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This reminds of the Fort Minor song, 'Where'd You Go'..but anyways..that was off topic. This was good and it was very interesting. The repetitiveness with the 'Where'd you go' added the final touchings to the poem. It was different from other poems I read but it was great. You have good ideas.
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this was great and diffrent i like is you come up with some good ones great job keep up the good work
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