The Night You Saw Me Cry


I did it to prove you wrong,
Only because you said I would cry,
But what you don't know is that I can't feel the pain of the blade,
As it sinks into my skin,

You said I was too chicken,
But again I proved you wrong,
Wrapping that chain around my neck,
As you stand there and watch me dangle,

You said they were just little cuts,
So I made them deeper,
Still you stayed unsatisfied,
And said you weren't that stupid,

So then I turned the tables around,
And handed you the knife,
I asked you to stab me,
I asked you to end my suffering,

You just stood there and stared at me,
Like I was some crazy person,
You dropped the knife and shook your head,
And that was the night you saw me cry.

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  • tjj
    March 9, 2007
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    wow ok that was good


  • Dirty and Broken
    January 15, 2007
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    oh shit....um, i'm sorry i can't say anything. right now...