Hold

I hold my hand up high
I hold my hand down low
I hold my head up high
I hold my head down low
I dont want to hold my head down low
I want to hold it high forever
I love this day that I look in
The sky looking at angels looking at
Me I will see them forever when I lay
In my bed when it's my time to die
Laying in my bed looking in the sky
At the angels looking at me

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  • Mai4ever
    January 15, 2007

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    This is very inspiring and was very good. I really liked the ending and the poem flow was amazing. This is excellent!


  • strawberry26
    January 15, 2007

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    i love it it was very good i loved the part about the angels in the sky theres nothing more pretty then angels i love this keep up the great work


  • BloodyKisses91
    January 15, 2007

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    i think that it is a good poem...i like the ending part the most...i found the story very short though..i think it would have been a bit better if you added more to it. keep up the good work though.