The Desert Eagle Club Chapter 1 "The Beginning Of The End"


Chapter 11



Feels like a million years since that night, but in reality it was only six months ago. The beginning of the end.... thats a lie it will never end.2



My first stop was a crack house full of murderers and rapists. I showed up around midnight scoped the place out.... or at-least thats what i told myself.3



I was dressed in black pants and a black jacket. My weapons were a 2 knifes and a cricket bat. Not much of an arsenal. When I headed in it was about 3 am. I headed for the front door. No need to be sneaky. Craaaaak. I kicked the door down. Death was coming and i wanted them to know it. There was a guy sitting behind the door as i kicked it in he stood up at the wrong time he was out cold. I cheeked his pockets. I cheeked his wallet his name was John Sulic he was just a small fish drug dealer i tied him up. There was a 2nd body in the room. He was dead. Shot 3 times twice in the chest once in the head. he was holding a gun. It was an old 8 shot revolver it had 6 bullets in the chamber. Something told me to go up so thats what i did. There was a staircase to the left i went up. it lead to a hallway with 3 doors at the end. 1 to the left 1 to the right. the one in the middle had a lock on it so i picked it. Craaaaaak. I kicked it down. Bang. I went down.4

Author notes

Been playing too many games so i thought i'd try some writing. Hope you enjoy. Chapter 2 coming to a screen near you.

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  • TommyTRASH
    January 17, 2007

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    Ohhh....nice start! You've written a spensful and a very nicely described chapter...great! Great stuff

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