Who could it be?

Sitting in my room,

Waiting for an answer,

Heard a big boom!

What could it be,

What damage could it do?

Someone help,

Before he pelts,

Me with bullets.

My last words,

Just happened to be,

O it’s just you!

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  • alohanewmexico13
    January 14, 2007
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    cool poem.


  • AlohaDolphinLover
    January 14, 2007

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    good

    You are not that bad of a poem writer. Sometimes, a good long poem is better than a short one. I still like the story.

  • mackenna34
    January 14, 2007
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    mackenna34

    u r really strange. JK!!! its good!