Sitting in my room,
Waiting for an answer,
Heard a big boom!
What could it be,
What damage could it do?
Someone help,
Before he pelts,
Me with bullets.
My last words,
Just happened to be,
O it’s just you!
A contest entry
- Harry Potter and / or Charmed by xxRainbowDawnxx.
100 points, ended February 24, 2007, 21 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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cool poem.
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good
You are not that bad of a poem writer. Sometimes, a good long poem is better than a short one. I still like the story. -
mackenna34
u r really strange. JK!!! its good!

