Jeffrey

Jeffrey I love you son and I love your name
You got that name from one of the best men
In the world your uncle jeff you will learn
About him soon he was my every thing son just
Like you are my every thing I love you jeffrey
even know I think you love your dad more I
I still love you more but hunny I love you

Your mommy

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments


  • EtherealButterfly
    January 18, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    noice, real noice! good job


  • Miss South Carolina
    January 16, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    nice

    it was very nice and sweey, keep up the good work


  • strawberry26
    January 13, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    i liked this one very good


  • Mai4ever
    January 13, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This is short but it's a nice little poem. The only thing I would like more in this is elaboration and detail. There wasn't much that was really touching. I would really like more description. But this is a good start.