Nikita

You where so little when you was born
I did not think you was going to make it
The doctors said you were to small
But I knew you were going to I felt it
If you was anything like me and your
Father you are a fighter and you are you
Proved that to us cause you are here with
Us a wonderful five year old little girl
My nikita my every thing my joy and my hope
You gave me a reason to believe in
everything I love you baby girl

your mommy

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  • Kyoku Luv
    April 20, 2007
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    Aww. *huggles you and Nikita*


  • Sunless Spirit
    April 15, 2007
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    www..com
    Purple Dude is flying in there


  • Sunless Spirit
    April 15, 2007
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    Go to:
    www. .com
    You can find Mr. Purple Dude there.


  • EtherealButterfly
    January 17, 2007
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    awwwww...i like this


  • strawberry26
    January 13, 2007
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    i like this one because shes a merical baby


  • Mai4ever
    January 13, 2007
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    Now this is a good simple poem. You have just the right amount of detail and description. The flow is pretty good although it still needs a little to smoothen (I'm not sure if that's a word). This would make a good collection with your other poems...like I said before. Good job!

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