Who?What?Where?&When?

Along time ago a young band student, named Johnny who loved to talk, started his first day of middle school. He was scared of the school bullies and all of the other phony stories kids had told him. He didn't want to embarass himself by telling his parents of how scared he really was. Instead he held in his fear and continued that Sunday afternoon as usual, watching tv. He happened to be watching a show called Ned's Declassifyed School Survival Guide. As you may now that is a show about a survival guide for Middle School. The episode happened to be about bullies. Johnny thought it was a very strange coincidence but it turns out it was much more. Johnny then started to notice the area on the show and quickly identified it as his new middle school. Johnny was still not as scared as he should be but he doesn't know what is coming. What Johnny didn't know was that his parents knew he was terrifyed about school the next day. That night Johnny was kidnapped by a burgular who say his address on the show he was watching earlier during the day. Johhny parents never found him again and of course they never did again. Turns out Johnny was not kidnapped but committed suicide from the fear. Anyone out there who is beginning a new middle school I suggest that if you are really worried about it come open to your parents. Trust me it helps.

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  • werner1221
    January 13, 2007
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    i had 1 req. and you couldnt meet it? you didnt meet it so you arnt qualfied for this contest.

  • alohanewmexico13
    January 13, 2007
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    Stellar!

    This story is good, funny, coincidental, scary(kind-of) and has a good message.


  • AlohaDolphinLover
    January 13, 2007
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    That was good, but it wasn't the same moral as my poem, like you said it was.


  • sunnyset
    January 12, 2007
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    Hey, nice moral of the story!
    I'm sure it'll help everyone who's about to start something new....

    So, kids and adults of all ages... whenever you're scared of something, the first people you should go to are your parents, or your friends.

    Nice message, and keep up the good work!