Lesley= le 16
Elizabeth= Liz and or li 16
Jasmine= Jazz and or JA 16
Julie= Jewel and or ju 15
Kayla= Ka 15
Michael= Micky and or mi
Second draft
Cr Lesley wakes up she crawls out of bed and yawns, walks toward the kitchen eats toast. She watches TV while eating. Takes shower, and hops out gets dressed punky for Skate Park grabs telephone call’s friend.
Cr
“Hey Jewel”
“What’s up?”
[Le] Do you want to go to the skate park?
[Ju] I can’t, I have cheerleading practice. Then after that, I’m goin to the pool.
[Le] Oh.
[Ju] I’m sorry. You can try Liz I saw her at her dads yesterday.
[Le] Its ok, well thanks
[Ju] See ya
[Le] Bye
Dials her friend Liz
[Le] Hey
[Li] Hey man
[Le] Do you want to head to the skate park with me?
[Li] Ooh today. Can’t I have guitar practice, maybe some other time?
[Le] Ok got to go call someonelse, bye
[Li] Peace
She then hangs up the phaone and begins stroking her cat.
[Le] Whom should I call now Snickers, huh baby.
Picks up phone calls Kayla
[Le] Hello is Kayla there.
[Ka’s mom] No, she went to her grandmothers in New York.
[Le] Ok, thanks bye.
[Ka’s mom] Buhbye
[Le] That’s everyone, Jazz is away at camp and everyone else is busy. Guess it means I’ll be goin solo, as usual.
She leaves house and heads to path in the dark night like woods near by. She walks for about a mile holding roller blades. Then she begins to feel uneasy, as though someone or something is watching her. She sees a shadow, quickens pace and reaches a bright and sunny clearing, the skate park is visible. She reaches it; it is vacant except an abandoned skateboard. The owner of the skateboard is just inside the woods…DEAD! She stays for a short time then leaves. She reaches her house not knowing that she was being hungrily watched the entire time she was out of her house. She
Comes in, throws roller blades on the floor, turns on TV and watches a paranormal show. Lesley SPENDS HER TIME LAZING ABOUT FOR A WHILE. Her dad comes home they eat dinner hang out.
[Le] Hey dad. How was your day?
[Dad] Ok, it was so hot in the kitchen.
[Le] Ughooh, what are we eaten for dinner? I was thinking maybe just pizza.
[Dad] Pizza sounds great.
[Le] Thanks and I like the cheese kind.
[Dad] Haha get up, make the pizza, and can you get me a chef coat for tomorrow?
[Le] Fine, but we are doin cheese.
[Dad] Ok
Lesley makes pizza they eat and she clears the table then goes and sits on the floor on a pillow and meditates then does yoga. The doorbell rings.
[Dad] Can you get that?
[Le] Not really, I am sort of in a knot.
He comes out sees her in a knot on the floor.
[Le] Please help me out.
[Dad] Why do you do this to your self?
[Le] It’s good for you. OW! Ow ow ow ow.
Ding.
Her dad heads for the door, opens door and steps out he sees no one and turns to come back in but is pulled back bye a VAMPIRE!
[Dad] HEL-
[Le] DAD!
She screams and grabs phone dials 911
[Le] help omg my dad was attacked
Things get blurry no sound she runs to her father tries to revive him cries screams. The creature stares at her as she frantically pulls her father into the house. She looks up and sees his face a face that would be plastered in her mind forever. She slams the door and locks it. She falls to the ground and begins to sob. He had no pulse. She was too late. On the day of her father’s funeral it is raining. She sees people talking but it is all just noise to her. She climbs into a car with her grand mother Margie and they drive to her new home, her new room.
[Gm] This will be your new room call me if you need anything.
[Le] Ok.
Her grandmother leaves. Lesley looks around the room and throws herself on the bed begins to cry cries herself to sleep in her wet jacket. Life goes on she stays in her room sleeps and then has a nightmare every night it’s her fathers death finally she wakes up at the face of the murderer. She gets up.
[Le] I have to do something or I will never get any sleep. She goes on internet and looks at pictures of the attackers in similar crimes she sees the picture of her father’s murderer and clicks on the article and sees that he thought he was a vampire and an explanation for the sketch it was a not possible to get a photograph not a single one turned out.
[Le] Weird
She looks on a site with information on vampires switches to another on witches and another on demons. She writes down info and an address to a magic shop “Crystal Ball”. She looks relaxed and heads to bed. She wakes up the next morning with a healthier looking face. She gets dressed and writes a note stating she was going on a walk to get some fresh air. She gets into car and drives to “Crystal Ball” the magic shop. As she enters the store, a bell dings. Bell dings. As she comes in a frail woman named Madame Drazynski greets her. Fl
[Fl] May I help you?
[Le] Maybe I um am looking for information on local vampires. I am also looking for tools to kill one of them.
[Fl] My, what a request! May I ask why?
[Le] What are you a cop or something? I need payback and you know what that is none of your business.
[Fl] Sorry!
She is being showed different weapons, talking to the woman about vampires, and looking at stuff. She eyes a cross bow and shoots at the target and surprisingly makes a bull’s eye. Madame Drazinski looks surprised.
[Le] I think I could get used to this.
She is eying weapon.
[Fl] Be careful, this town could use someone to take care of the things that go bump in the night you know.
Lesly looks startled.
[Fl] There are more than just vampires out there. Much, much more.
[Le] Listen I just want payback. I am not going to be some hero.
[Fl] we will see.
She spends her day signing up for self-defense class and Tai quando. Then she creeps back to her new room. She hides her stuff and comes back out. She finds her grandmother and a stiff looking guy sitting in the living room.
“Hi. Not to be rude but who are you?”
“He’s my lawyer we are going over some paper work that was messed up during examination of your father’s last will. It seems as though everything is left to you but we have to prove it in court.”
“That’s nice ugh excuse me.”
She runs to her room and begins to cry. She sees the corner of the bag of stuff she just bought and dries her eyes.
“Revenge will be mine even if I have to kill every evil thing that exists. I will get my revenge.”
Her grandma is talking to lawyer.
“I’m sorry she is still very upset. It just happened you know.”
“Its fine she must feel terrible, maybe we should handle the paper work.”
“No its fine. After all he was my father.”
“Ok. Let’s get to work.”
They spend several hours working.
That should be everything. I will call you and let you know the final details. Goodbye.”
[Unison] “Bye.”
“I think I’m gonna head to bed. I’m exhausted.”
The next day, Lesley is looking at photographs of her father and herself. A tear rolls down her cheek. Grandma knocks on the door she quickly hides the pictures and dries her eyes.
“Come in.”
“Morning, I’m heading to the store and I wanted to know if you needed anything.”
“No, I think I’m good. Wait I do need some shampoo.”
“Do you have any particular kind?”
“No. Oh and I might not be here when you get back.”
“Why not?”
“I’m ummmm going to the skate park.”
“Ok. Just be home before dark. Love you.”
“Love you too. Bye”
“Bye.”
Lesley sits and wait’s a few minutes then gets up and looks out the window. She sees her grand mother’s car pull out and head down the street. She then gets ready. {Fashionable clothes for this time the movie is made but must be black} She grabs a bag with her stakes, cross bow, cross and holy water. She gets into her car and drives to the skate park. When she gets there, she parks near the woods. She gets out and walks into the woods, which are very dark and eerie.
“Ok, I’m officially freaked out.” Lesley said to herself.
She spots a cabin hidden behind some trees. Lesley walks towards it, hides beneath the windowsill, and listens to the conversation inside.
“Hey man. What’s up?”
The sound of this “person’s” voice chilled her to her bones. She did not know why. Another one responded.
“Not much. I brought a friend over for dinner.”
Lesley crouches beneath the window and tried to decide if any of these people were vampires. Suddenly it hit her, it is only ten o‘clock in the morning. It’s not dinnertime yet unless you have whacked sleeping hours. Like sleeping during the day. She then heard a frightened voice respond.
“Yea, umm I’m n not hungry. So I’ll be leaving now.”
“Really, we are.” The one that gave her the chills sneered.
Suddenly she heard a crashing sound and someone let out a painful scream. She got up and bolted towards the door. With one swift motion she raised her crossbow and kicked open the door. She was greeted with a punch in the gut. The fighting began. The vampire grabbed her crossbow and broke it with his bare hands. While she was fighting, the victim, Mick, was being drained of his blood. She fought with all her strength and succeeded in staking the vampire. Alas, it was too late, Mick had been drained and now he was slowly changing. Soon he would be a strong and dangerous vampire. She had failed. Or had she? “One is not permanently a vampire if they stay untainted by blood and if you want the doing to be undone whom who did this deed shall be staked for thee.” Where had I read that? Lesley thought. She knew that she had found it during her research, and that it would help.
“What was that?” whispered a temporarily weak and tired Mick.
“A vampire.” Lesley told him shakily. “Um you kind of are going to be one too.” She mumbled hesitantly.
“What?” Shouted Mick. Man I do not want to become one of those. Steak me or something. I do not want to become leech! Blurted Mick.
“Relax! I read somewhere that if you kill the vampire that bit you and don’t kill an innocent you can be spared so just relax its not over yet.” Comforted Lesley.
“Ok good.” Whispered Mick before he collapsed.
“Wait what is your name?”
“Mick.” And then he blacked out and crumbled to the floor.
Lesley searched the place for a pencil and some paper. She had to write him a note.
Mick,
Stay out of the light, obviously. I’ll be back soon
Don’t kill anything. I know you may be hungry but
control your self.
From, Lesley
“That will do.” she sighed. She walked out and looked back to the cottage. I nearly failed I better be more careful. She walks to the skate park and looks at the clueless people. How is it that they can go on not knowing about this. The infestation of evil. Its so weird I can feel it all ready. The evil is mounting, there is more going on than I know. With a sigh she climbed into her car and began her drive home.
“Hello Margie.” Greeted Mrs. Ferri. Mrs. Ferri is an old friend of Lesley’s grandma.
“Hello Janice. How are you?”
“Wonderful.” She replied as they sat down in the cozy living room. “Although, I am worried about you.” Janice stated in a concerned voice. “You are raising a teenage girl all by your self. Not even to mention the loss of your son. I think…I think you should hire a maid.”
“What are you talking about? I keep house wonderfully.” Margie replied. “If anyone should be worried about it Lesley.”
“Now, what makes you say that?” Janice asked her. Complete confusion crossed her face. “I thought she was doing so well.”
“That is what I thought too.” She said with a sigh. “That is what I thought too.”
Author notes
i wrote this along time ago and stopped i mean like 2002 its pretty rough and unoriginal just felt like postin it i lost most of it when i moved.
