Four Letters Prophecy

Deristeria Merastyera Eternity 120

Of Tidings Of Questions

It is with great sorrow and with great and heavy heart that it is my duty to write such tidings as these but it is my duty to write this for the sake of the future. He seems to know what is coming else he would not have me write this. I fear the ending of our tide and if it is to end then it is possible that He is planning our end. Only He knows of our secrets and sad it is to know that he knows of so much. It is a wonder as to why he became what it is that he became.

Enough of this it is no longer necessary to speak of such sadness what is needed is for us to speak of our future. The time is near for things to become complete and if He is right which we all know he is then it is to happen soon enough. We must not be caught off guard and so long as our tower stands we will stand by it for it is what we are and what we must do. I do however feel the power of one of us failing and failing more and more each day. I fear the worst has yet to come, perhaps a new time of chaos is arriving oh so quickly. Power is beginning to cause the tower to fall and if our tower falls the tower of the plains will fall as well and once the flower of the plains falls the gates are to come next.

Remember the last time the tower became corrupt it took a many humans and many souls of the past to purge the evil. I still don’t understand how He was able to free the king of time but worse than that I don’t really understand what happened to the son of time. Our past is a most strange one as is the humans. I do also fear that we are all naturally evil and naturally warriors because the humans are very violent. They kill without meaning, steal without care, and destroy without mercy. The people of the earth have become quite violent and have begun to destroy the powers of our earthen friend. I do so hope they learn that their deeds will not go unpunished for even our gracious and merciful master must deal their sentences. It aches my heart to see such great souls being thrown into hell.

The youngsters fail and begin to act like their teenage relatives doing the most unintelligent things that any one human can do I fear they will waste away many a years of life trying to be what it is they were not meant to be. Everyone, everyone all the teens give in they fail to do what is right they do always what it wrong. The dawn of a strange age is befalling the humans while a new age is befalling the heavens and everything of it. Soon every child from one side of the world to the next will take up arms against each other and I can not say that they don’t deserve it for they do but sad it is that it would be upon them so soon. I am sorry to have to tell you of these tidings but the time has come for our parting so let it be so that this letter ends like all endings.

Hoping for Thy Divine Future

Nerienya Kindelest 6, 20

To war it shall be

As queen of my lands I do declare that we will have no choice but to act in this war. We can not avoid this time of war for long and thus we must enter prepared. My wise council has decided that the time has come that we enter this war. They have predicted that if we do not then our time of peace is over and they will come to destroy us in our great city. We can not allow this to happen. Too much depends upon our staying alive and we can not abandon the citizens, I will not allow it. My hope is that you feel the same way general and that all of our soldiers will feel this way as well. Share this letter with them and tell them the queen is with them, they are not alone in this fight for my first duty is to handle our political matters and keep our council from exercising to much power. As we are all beings like a human we fear many a things and we desire strength. These two powers are desired by the darker sides of us and we must learn to let them go.

I honestly do hope we all feel the same way. Our great city depends upon it however our plans for this war must be spoken and I have taken the duty to write them for us. It is now your duty to carry these on to the warriors and so on through the lines of our defense. General Kirsita and General Ustaria will take the warriors of the wall and those we can spare will take to the courtyard of our great city. It is their task to never allow a single beast into the higher levels of the city. We must have the best of defenses otherwise the people will fall. I do hope that you will be able to keep the creatures out but if not we will not hold it against you. It was only fate that brought this to us and thus we have no right to be angry with you. Do your tasks to the best of your ability, this is all I ask.

Generals that are left it is your duty to keep the plains as clear as possible. I only hope that you can keep the monsters away but even with the many soldiers you will have I still believe your task will be difficult. Only time will tell us if we were meant to keep our position of power. I do hope we can but it is my belief that we will have much loss then we will be intending. Beware my great friend for it is to my belief that I must give my life to save the lives of the millions but heed this someday you will meet Her. She will guide us back and we will take our rightful places once more. With great care, love, and compassion I send to you this letter of what is to come but now I must say good bye.

Forever your Friend and Forever thine companion

Queen Kristalla of Alexandria

Dear Mother

My great mom I do hope that you have had a great time so far. Though dad isn’t really that much like you he seems to really admire you. I know because he hardly ever stops speaking of you. Life could hardly be that much happier now because we don’t have to fight anymore and you and my little brother have the greatest of friendships. I would very much like to see him but I can’t really say that I will. There is something strange going on in the big cities and this is why I am writing. People, even kids, seem to be disappearing into nothingness like they never existed. I know because at school some of the good students are no longer there. One girl has been absent for the longest time ever I fear that we will eventually be apart and not the same type of apart that we have now but a type of apart that extends farther than time itself. Oh well no matter and not worth worrying right now we just need to focus on what is to come and that is all. What has passed is no longer as necessary anymore.

You might be wondering why I am writing this as a hand written letter and if so there is a simple answer for that. Nearly all the machines in our city have either begun malfunction or break down altogether. So not many machines, the thing we just had to depend upon, are working anymore and thus many of us are no longer able to get along with our life. A lot of the adults are lost without their machines. It is scary how dependent we are upon these stupid things but I guess that is how it is and thus this is what it is like. Well send my regards to little brother and everyone else who lives over there.

With More Love Than Can Be Described

Angel Your Daughter

“Let us see what kind of knowledge you have. Now remember that if you do hold this prophecy back our fate will be worse than that of death,” hissed a cold voice.

“I tell you I have no prophecy,” said a man shakily.

“You don’t have a prophecy to tell me? I think you are quite mistaken my good spirit. I know of the prophecy that is to be told to me. Tell me how I could not know. Unless you want to have a harsh punishment befallen upon you,” hissed the cold voice slightly unhappy.

“Since I am your guest here the least you can do is allow me to know what this place is,” said the other man. No sound came from the cold voice but there was a scuffling of feet as something removed the blindfold from the man’s face.

Though he could see he kept his eyes shut but then slowly lifted one eyelid and then the other. His view was not much different from that of when his eyes were closed but he could faintly see the small area around. One thing he could see clearly in the gloom was that of the cold voice. His pale face shone bright in the darkness making his eyes, which glowed that of bright red, look like bright fire. He was draped in black smoke that whipped in a nonexistent wind.

“So this is the accommodation of a prophecy,” said the prophet smartly.

“Would you like a better place? So would I,” laughed the pale man. “Now tell me of my prophecy or other means will be used to sort you out.” He pointed behind the prophet with long, skinny fingers. When the prophet turned around he looked upon five demons each armed with strange weapons.

“So do you feel giving and cooperative or should I ask them to persuade you?”

“Fine I guess I can give you your prophecy,” said the prophet trying to sound brave. He then looked up into the blackness that was the ceiling and reached for an unseen power. Light clouded his vision as everything began to blur into nothingness. “The time has come for light and dark to collide, collide into chaos. When the new world comes into existence and the savior comes to destroy that new creation. The fight for power begins with a simple being, control it and light will fail let it go and the dark will fall into deeper depths. Two children have come into existence and soon will hold the power to control the fate of every human of earth.

Two children of power and eleven spirits have come into existence and have been noticed by the entities. They will have near as much control over the fates of life as that of dark and light. Enter the planet they must and fight many of the creations of darkness. The creator of the planet need only to exert his will and the war will end there but if it is wished of the creator then the end will be far from now. Wait thrice times you must and kill the grand saviors five times and what I speak will be true, the reign in heaven will come to an end and all light could be extinguished. Go now and fulfill thy tasks and return not until thee has done what it is that must, will, and has to be done is done.”

Grace of it all

I have done wrong in this world and must right my wrong. This world may not be the same for the longest time and I must confess that it is partially of my fault. Sadly my grace I can not truly speak of what it is that I have done so I have written to warn you of a danger that is soon to come across this land. I have done much wrong to this world and deserve my punishment. It is only my hope that I am able to get this letter to you before time has run dry. I believe that this letter will get to you soon enough but my time of writing this is not up and I must fulfill my task that He has sent to me.

He wants me to write this letter but whether he will allow the letter to reach you is a mystery all its own. It was not my wish to do this task that was asked of me and as much as I wish myself a stronger being I was not. I am sorry that I have failed in being a strong enough being. I know I do not deserve you compassion but it must be so, so I must write this letter. My mind is riddled with many a things, especially the events that have recently happened. It was a a a kind of saying that I have spoken and spoken of things, things that may become part of this worlds past. Life as we know it is about to be thrown into a time of chaos and then into a time that will judge all of our actions. If we do not act soon enough both worlds will be filled with things I can not speak of and nor do I want to ever see or at least fight. I guess my cowardice has taken control of me again.

I am so sorry that I would not be stronger of purpose but I do suppose that you created me for a good reason otherwise my powers would have no meaning. I do apologize that I am not stronger of character but this is what it is and this is how it is. My last line is a quick one for my captors are coming for me. Please take this warning and know that He wished to rise above everything and when he succeeds a great war between many allies will break out and fill the land with more chaos than we have expected. Our two plan-

Author notes

As you comment this story please don't tell me about the grammatical errors of it.  I am not great comma user and I am not done with the story. It was meant to be a novel. Most authors love to finish the novel and then go back and fix all the grammatical errors. Don't tell me about them I don't care I will fix them on my own later. Tell me how you feel and what the four letters are foreshadowing. I know it is vague so please spare me that much it is only a prologue and a very rough draft. I thank you for the comments and the such.

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  • Brent
    January 10, 2007

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    I couldn't really tell what was going on. Some of the mysteriousness and vagueness in the beginning seems forced and overdone, but does make the reader curious. Was this supposed to be the rapture or something Lord-of-the-Rings-y? You're also missing a lot of commas. If you clean it up and rearrange things a little more cohesively, this could be the beginning of a good story.

  • jamesbauman
    January 10, 2007
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    it was very confusing. try to cover up all the loose ends. Good use of character transfer.


  • Golden Guardian
    January 10, 2007

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    I didn't follow it all the way, too many things left out in small amounts. The description was good, and I liked how it was written in letter form most of the time.
    -Ethan


  • BloodyKisses91
    January 9, 2007

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    i like your story it was easy for me to read it and i like that....i liked the middle and ending most..but i liked the beginning too good luck in the contest.


  • matt101
    January 9, 2007
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    this story seems really inresting and i really cant wait until the next part. good on you!


  • QueenWolf
    January 9, 2007

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    A very good beginning to a long story. I enjoyed it, you have a good plot, and a smooth writing style.

    You make people want to read more.

    Well done and good luck.

    Penny x x x


  • freespirit51
    January 8, 2007

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    Very enjoyable piece. I found it to be an easy read and moved along well. It was a real pleasure to read it.


  • kelseyo
    January 8, 2007
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    i like your writing style. its never boring and has a nice flow to it. good job


  • flipflopinTM
    January 8, 2007
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    good job at making this conversational this is well done good luck in the contest and keep writing

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