The First Time ~ Volume I

I arrived at your apartment for what you had called a "special night."  You led me inside - I had been there many times before, but we never had any real fun, always keeping our clothes on.  There was a table lit with candles and you motioned me over to a chair where I sat down.  You poured a fine wine and brought over an elegant dinner.  All throughout the meal I couldn't stop thinking of how it would be to finally fuck you.  I felt my cunt grow hotter between my legs and I knew that tonight would definitely be special.  1

You cleared our plates and brought out some strawberry shortcake for dessert.  It was so delicious but my mind still wandered to thoughts of spreading the whipped cream over your body, feeding you strawberries and vice versa.  After we finished, you led me to the couch where we sat and talked briefly before you leaned over to kiss me.  Your breath was very hot and there was no doubt that your cock was hard - I could see it straining against your pants.  Our lips met in an unbridled yet sweet passion, tongues dancing the forbidden dance.2

I looked you in the eyes and said "I want you now."  At that point you picked me up and carried me to the bedroom where you laid me back onto the bed.  My body trembled with a mixture of excitement and nervousness,  your eyes piercing mine as our lips met once again.  Your lips left mine and you gently kissed my earlobe as you started unbuttoning my blouse very tenderly.  I could feel your breath on my neck, your tongue gliding over my shoulders as you removed my blouse and tossed it onto the floor.3

You pulled away from me to admire my white lace bra, however you knew I wasn't nearly as pure as the color.  The lace hugged my ample breasts perfectly, cupping them with the delicate fabric.  I felt your hands on my breasts, pulling and twisting my already hard nipples.  Satin straps slowly slid off my shoulders as you unhooked my bra, taking its rightful place next to my crumpled blouse.4

Your eyes remained locked on my naked breasts in awe, taking in every curve, committing them to memory.  With your eyes still set, your hands met with my nipples, pinching them between your fingers.  As you twisted and tugged on them my head tipped back, soft moans escaping my lips.  I ran my fingers through your hair, pulling your head down towards my cleavage, practically forcing your mouth upon my breasts.  Your lips found my soft skin, your tongue explored ever so gently but avoiding my nipples for the moment.  All of a sudden I felt my entire body on fire and I began to squirm - your teeth were clamped down on my nipple.  The pleasure was absolutely unbearable, I felt all strength in my body start to vanish.5

I could feel your excitement as I ground my hips against you, your cock throbbed in its prison of denim.  My hands slid down your body where I tried to take off your pants but you whispered into my ear that it wasn't time for that yet.  The sound of your voice coupled with your labored breath against my earlobe sent me into a frenzy of animalistic desire.  I wanted you so much, my body ached for your touch.  Taking your hand in mine, I slid them up my thigh, the fact that my skirt was still on frustrated me immensely.  Looking into your eyes, I begged you to take my skirt off, promising you'd like seeing what was underneath.  I was taken aback by your strength as you practically ripped the fabric off my body to reveal silky white thigh highs and lace crotchless panties.6

"Oh my god."   Barely audible, you stared at my half naked body, catching a glimpse of my swollen cunt through the panties.  The lace was soaked through, I was dripping with desire, even my thighs glistened.  Looking down upon me, you mentioned how I looked so innocent all dressed in white but I instantly assured you that I was not innocent at all.  I think you already knew that though.7

Slowly, you removed my thigh highs, your hands firm but gently caressing.  Your fingers danced along my inner thighs, teasing me mercilessly before finally removing my panties.  I had shaved my cunt bare for this, all the time taken in preparation would soon be worthwhile.  I moaned with delight as you slipped a finger into my dripping cunt, so wet, I could see it in your eyes that you wanted to fuck me right then and there.  Somehow you managed to keep your pants as another finger slipped inside me.  The slowness of it all was driving me insane with lust, you began to rub my clit with your other hand.  Soon I was writhing with desire, my chest rose and fell more pronounced as my breathing became more labored.  8

I wanted to cum right then and there but you suddenly stopped for a moment.  Your hands spread my legs wide and I glanced up to see you slide down my body, your head perfectly positioned between my legs.  I tried to put my hands between my legs but you pushed them away and spread my swollen lips.  A few moments passed, your eyes fixated on my swollen clit as I grew rather impatient.  Forcefully, I pushed your head down so you had no choice other than to lick me.  Your tongue flicked at my clit first lightly then harder as I began to thrash wildly on the bed.  In a rather firm voice, you looked up at me and told me to stop moving if I expected to cum.9

The pleasure was so intense, I couldn't help myself.  My hips bucked against your tongue, I bit my lip to keep from screaming out your name before I realized I didn't have to be quiet this time.  All at once you slipped three fingers into my swollen cunt, no longer being gentle.  Your fingers found my g-spot, rubbing like there was no tomorrow.  The combination of your fingers and tongue hurled me over the edge.  As my cunt spasmed, I screamed out, "Oh god I'm cumming!"  Your arm pushed my hips down against the bed to hopefully keep me still. 10

When I finally relaxed you just looked up at me and grinned rather mischievously before bowing your head once again, this time slipping your tongue into my cunt.  I shivered in ecstasy, feeling your tongue probing my inner wetness until I felt myself nearing another orgasm.  So intent on making me cum a second time, you rubbed my clit hard as your tongue darted in and out of my aching cunt, licking up my cum.   You traced a finger along my cunt down to my ass.  11

How I wanted you to take me right then and there, my cunt dripping all over your chin.  Slowly, I felt your finger slide all the way into my ass, bringing me that much closer to the impending orgasm.  Soon your finger was pumping in and out of my ass hard and fast and all of a sudden I came again, my cunt spasming around your tongue.  My juices flowed out into your mouth as you lapped even harder until all that was left was my damp cunt.  I lay there, shaking with pleasure, as your lips met mine once again.  We kissed passionately, our tongues wrestling as I tasted myself on you.  12

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  • ChaingangAngel
    October 22, 2004
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    I loved this It reminds me of the things I did when I was feeling loved!!!!!


  • rutlandxyz
    July 13, 2004
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    delicious write. looking forward to Part III. you are so comfortable with erotica. a reflection, I suppose, of the comfort you have in your skin. a good and rare thing. I guess research for this sort of writing is great fun!!!! do your partners know you write about having sex with them? I think they would be pleased... keep up the great work.. . r.

  • MirandaNicole
    May 25, 2004
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    Hmmm... Hot, but I must say I absolutely hate the word "cunt", so therefore this, to me, wasn't as good as it has the potential to be. Your imagery is pretty good, though. Yes, "porn" is definitely a good word. LOL. It has a lot of cliches, though. Anyway, thanks for sharing. Keep it up. I'll read part II later. I don't have time now.

    ~Miranda


  • bethany may
    May 21, 2004
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    wow...this is HOT...i could see everything...fantastic imagery..you are very talented at writing erotica...can't wait to read more as i've already read volume 2....this definetly made me just a little horny...keep writing...Luv Caz

  • sweetlolly15
    May 12, 2004
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    *waits impatiently for Volume II* lol. this was so good and way hott. got me horny. lol. very sexy. great job!

  • elg1610
    May 9, 2004
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    Wow, you're good with imagery...that seemed so real. i could just see it...man.

  • listen
    May 4, 2004
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    yes,i suppose this could be taken as porn.are you making a movie anytime soon?i'd see it.lol.seriously,this was great.detail,imagery,and oh i don't know...sex maybe.lol.perfect elements.a story that made me cover my mouth while reading so as not to scream out with excitement(yes,i do "get off"easily)because my parents are home and they'd hear.that would not be cool.i would applaud a billion times,but i can't.so jsut know that i would.ttul.looking foward to reading the 2nd pt.

  • Anais Elaine
    April 30, 2004
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    very hotttt!!!

    I agree with everyone else, wow you should make money writing stories like this, would be a good Black Lace novel, maybe you should contact them they like errotic stuff.
    Take care Im going to read part 2 now.
    Elaine

  • sweethart
    April 22, 2004
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    this is really good..don't forget to write the second part! you have very good details in here..nice visuals..goodness, I think that I need to go take a cold shower now! lol, anyways, nice write..
    luve,
    Hilary xoxo

  • Scream Kick Run
    April 20, 2004
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    very nice. i need to read the second part, lolz.

  • candy177
    April 17, 2004
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    LOL actually this isn't a true story...this was just something I sat down and wrote a long time ago...I've been thinking of breaking it up though because it is rather long. Perhaps in a few days I'll post some more! Thanks for commenting


  • Princess Muse silver member
    April 15, 2004
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    Good write...I think we dated the same guy! Good visualizations. Don't leave the audience hanging too long for part II.

  • Sunkissedrose
    April 12, 2004
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    This is really good! Unfinished or not, I see it definetly leading to a few fans of the hands

    Carrie

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