I walked into the doctor's office. My doctor said 'Well I have some good news for you!' 'Am I having a boy or a girl?' I said.1
'You are going to have a boy and a girl' she replied, 'You are going to have twins!' I was overcome with joy, yet I was in shock. I was going to have a boy AND a girl. How amazing is this, I thought to myself. I was going to have two children at the same time. I could hardly wait to tell Chris. He will be so pleased. I got into my car and put the key into the ignition. I turned the key and drove home as fast as I could. When I got home, i sat down at my desk, took out my red stationary with a border of flowers and my green pen. I began writing:2
Dear Chris, 3
I have found out what I am having. I am going to have twins. I am going to have a boy and a girl. Isn't this great news. I know that this will cheer you up. I yearn for the day that I will see your face once again. I hope that things are going well in Iraq and that nothing horrible happens from now until the time that we meet again. I miss your bright smile that brings light into my life. But anyways, I have not decided yet what I will name our daughter but, our son's name will definitely be Alexander for that is a beautiful name and I am sure it will fit him. I love you dearly but I am afraid I must end this letter for I have to go run some errands. 4
All my love,5
Athena6
I placed the letter in the matching envelope and addressed it to Chris. I placed a stamp with a red heart on it on the envelope and ran to the mailbox to place it in before the mailman comes. I went back into the house and decided that I should clean up. It was definitely time for spring cleaning. I picked up my blue broom and the matching dust pan and began to sweep up the kitchen. The dirt was horrendous. There was so much. I should clean more often, I thought to myself. Once I finished I took out my mop and began mopping up the place. The floor glistened in the glorious sunlight. I went upstairs to dust. My dust rag in one hand and pledge in the other. A bottle of windex lay on the floor. I began in one corner, cleaning the bookshelves until it sparkled then moved on to the nightstands.I began to wash the windows. I sprayed windex on the windows until I could see myself in them. The windows were streak-free. A bird flew into the window and fell on the floor. It got up and flew away, back into its tree in my yard. 7
I finished cleaning the House and decided that I should do some gardening. I went outside. i put on my sun hat and gathered my tools from the tool shed. I retrieved my plants from the garage where I had stowed them after I bought them. I got down on my knees and began weeding my garden. The weeds put up a mighty fight. I tugged with all my might, ripping them out one by one. Those green menaces refused to budge. So I pulled very hard until they all came up. The pile next to me came up to my knees when I stood up. I began planting two rows of tomatoes, one row of peas, three rows of corn, and two rows of cucumbers. 8
I ran upstairs and took a nice hot shower. From my long day, I fell asleep right away. But excitement for what I was going to have remained in my mind.9
Author notes
whoo its short but I know what my next one will be about so that one should be out soon. Happy Easter!
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Comments
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Wow! that was great, Congrats on the twins!! Great write!!!!
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TWINS.....(suprise!!!)...lol...awwwwwww...very cute that it is going to be a girl and boy.....she did all that cleaning whoa there..lol...that was fast cleaning...it would take me hours and hours and hours etc.....but anyways that is sooo cool!....the bird hitting the window..comercial flashing through my mind...lol....random...actually hilarious!...great job!..can't wait to see whats next...~ T
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yay! twins..awww... i love babies...*sniffles* i can't wait to see what happens...don't make it too sad or amber might start crying
hehe.. cause we all know ambers emotional hahaha lol
much love
God Bless
Amber -
it's a bit rushed. I never saw twins coming and that excities me, but you should have used a bit more exclamatory punctiuation to show the happiness. It kinda sounds like you wrote it really fast, butI still liked it.
