The Path

All around me lush leaves of tall glorious trees. The sunlight is gleaming over the tree tops, shining through the trees onto me. The sunlight is gleaming with each step I take. I feel awakened to a new light in life guiding me toward a new path in life. I feel rejuvenated and cleansed of sins by the sunlight.

With the appearance of a bear I slowly go a round it and make a dash for the nearest tree and climb to the treetop. My time up in the treetops, staring down on the bear, makes me realize all the fears life can bring.

As I walk further down the path I sea seashore. The oceans waves roll in and roll out gently and calmly cleansing the shore. The massive ocean is vast and full of mystery that entices me to know more. This ocean shore may clam me, but yet it can be so powerful.

As I stand in awe of the ocean, I notice a small plastic cup. I pick up the cup, dip it in the ocean water to cleanse it and throw it away in a nearby trash can along the edge of the beach.

I walk away from the ocean back to forest path. I see a key on the soil of the path. It is a small golden key. I pick the key up and put it in my pocket, to keep for later, to find out where it goes.

I walk even further along the path and come to the end of the forest. In front of me is a vast flat land; smooth with no bumps. This flat land is unlike in so many ways; it has no bumps unlike like, it feels unreal. This flat land feels endless and hopeless, like darkness.

I walk all the way across the flat land until I notice a building, not just any building a small cozy cottage, to me this cottage feels like home. This cottage may not be a mansion, but its attracting warmth draws me into it.

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