[ "What would you say..." ]

"What would you say..."

"What would I say what?" he asked back. He had long black hair that fell gracefully over his deep violet eyes. He cocked his head sideways slightly and looked at the woman.

She blushed a beautiful shade of pink under his violet gaze. The blonde shuffled in her seat and swept her long blonde bangs out her sapphire eyes. She smiled at him.

She batted her eyelashes and scooted closer to the black haired man. Now sitting next to him, she lent over and whispered in his ear. "I've been wanting to try something lately..." Her warm breath tickled his ear as she continued. "But Tora wouldn't want to try so i was wondering..."

A confused look slid across his face as she whispered the rest to him. She pulled back and winked at the violet eyed man, who met her sapphire eyes with confusion. Said sapphire eyed girl was now blushing a deep crimson. "So??" She asked.

He was still slightly bewildered. "I don't think I've had enough sake for that yet..." he answered, taking a deep swig from the sake container. For some reason, the man couldn't shake a deep smirk on his face. The girl looked at him and said, "Well, Sasuke?"

Sasuke took another gulp of alcohol and opened his mouth to respond when...

"What is the meaning of this?"

Sasuke and the woman looked up at the person who spoke. He had long silvery hair that was tied in a low ponytail. His red eyes glared at the two sitting on the porch. "Sasuke! Hyacia! There will be no affairs on my porch!" he yelled at them.

Sasuke and Hyacia exchanged looks and Sasuke said, "What, Ashura?" Ashura shot a angry look at Sasuke and said, "Get Hyacia home...NOW!" Sasuke debated whether to tell him to;

a ) piss off

b ) point and laugh at the rediculous apron Ashura was wearing

Or c ) just kill the useless half brother.

Taking another look at the furios Ashura, Sasuke decided to do none of the above and just take Hyacia home. Sasuke took Hyacia's arm and left, but not before shooting back, "What, you jealous?"

Ashura was even more flustered than before and started to yell profanities at the retreating two. When out of earshot from the fuming man, Hyacia turned to Sasuke and said, "So?? Can we??"

Sasuke smirked evilly as they reached her house and said, "Why not?" With a gratifying look from Hyacia, she pulled him into her house and slid the door shut.

xXx

The next morning, Hyacia woke feeling refreshed, relaxed and so glad she got it out of her system. After all, she had really wanted to do that. Really REALLY badly. After all, who thoguht Sasuke's hair looked so good in pigtails?

Author notes

Lol. I just thought, people are so perverted so it would be funny to write this one!

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  • Lover of Stories
    December 5, 2007

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    SASUKE! SQUEE! You caught my attention from the moment she said "Sasuke." Sasuke is AWESOME!!! XD And imagining him with pigtails...Aaack! Teehee! ^_^


  • Rebel Rebel silver member
    December 31, 2006
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    I got my hair done like that once.

    Yes, I have had some of my funniest moments when going to private hairdressing sessions. I once got an afro and had it straightened in a meeting kinda like the one you described. It was so funny because we were constantly mistaking the curling iron for various and sundry other toys. Smile.


  • The Racing Snake
    December 31, 2006

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    Very good.

    I enjoyed this very much indeed, the use of language and the way the dialog is put down is perfect.

    Thanks very much for entering the competition.

    All the best.

    jsdk

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 3.