Random Rantings (not so much a story) #3

Everyone says it will get better, well all I've seen is shit getting worse. Maybe they say that so you will cheer up a little and not look so depressed all the time. But what they don't know is that when you go home you think about dragging that razor across you wrists for the very last time. So until you finally end it all you wear a mask just to spite them.

Most people are worried about what clothes they're going to wear today, or how they will do their hair. What about the people that are worried whether or not they will make 3 hours at work??? What about the people that have to find a way to feed their children and pay the bills??? This world is going to shit and we're are all going down with it. This may not be you or me but there are others out there that this discribes.

Should I throw away my razors??? It is pointless to count my scars because I wont get the same number twice. My brother said I would cry like a baby if I got stabbed; I told him we'll see. Today I handed my brother my knife and told him to stab me. Tomorrow I'll hand him the gun and tell him to pull the triger. Last night my brother preached to me about god. Tonight it will be my mother.

Uhh...umm...BLA!!!!!!!!.....THE EVIL ROBOTS ARE GOING TO GET MEH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......DON'T TELL THEM WHERE I LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!....THEY'LL KILL MEH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Miss South Carolina
    January 14, 2007

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    i liked it i thought it was interesting ,even though it is not really so much a story like you said, I can relate to what you are saying, keep up the good work


    • Rize
      January 14, 2007
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      thanks a lot for your comment.....yeah not a lot of people can relate to what i say at least not in the town i live in....again thank you...

      ~D K~


  • Dirty and Broken
    January 1, 2007

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    i guees the last p[aragraph, besides the robot rantings was the best....


    i love you, and i really need to talk to you....


    • Rize
      January 2, 2007
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      why....are you gonna hit me or somethin.....please don't i'll be good...well maybe if it was with a whip it wouldn't be so bad....

      ~The Bitch~

      I love you....


      • Dirty and Broken
        January 3, 2007
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        no, i will not hit you...i refuse to hit you as i am not able to stand causing your pain....except for the whip thing....and then only if you agreed......

        i love you as well....


  • backdrop.silhouette
    December 30, 2006
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    Um...hmmmm...interesting...very, interesting

    lol, if the robits are coming to get you, use a magnet! i'm being ceral, it'll mess them up!lol

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