....."I can't do this," Dre said.
He was lying as hard he could.
"Yes you can, Because I want it just as bad as you," Tia said softly.
Dre looked deeply into her eyes, not being able to resist the pull of their lips to one another. Tia began to straddle him, as her tongue tasted his lushious lips from top to bottom. It then entered inside, exploring his mouth. Dre gripped her tighter from the much wanted pleasure.
He then slid his hands under her top and explored her back, surprised that there was no bra underneath. Tia leaned her head back so he could pleasure her neck with soft, moist and wet pecks. She even loved the intensity of his biting of her neck and sucking hard to leave hickies. She stepped to meet his passion level and began to drag her nails down his back as he did the same.
"Oh shoot," Tia said as her tank top clung to her wet ponytail after Dre lifted it to reveal her firm, supple, 26 D-cupped breasts. As her tank top hit the floor, Dre's tall tee wasn't far behind. Tia admired his developing sixpack andcontiued to kiss him. Dre took his right hand slowly down her back and into her pajama shorts squeezing and caressing her marvelous asset.
Dre took Tia's body into his hands and laid her on the sofa as they switched positions over and over. Slowly Tias shorts slid down her legs along with her matching g-string revealing a hunger waiting to be fed. Tia bit gently but with passion and intensity unto his bottome lip as he began to take her virginity. He knocked once making Tia's eyes open wide along with her mouth. He knocked twice and realized he had to open her a little. After countless tries, Dre finally dug inside a fresh cave.
Tia stopped kissing him for she could not resist the involuntary moans escaping from her lips. She moaned and moved with every thrust. She screamed, she squealed, moaned, and breathed deeply. Dre loved the feeling of warmth, and tightness of her love around his own. Thus making the contractions in his love more pleasurable.
"I love you so much," Tia cried out as beads of sweat began to form on her forehead. Her face scrunched up upon a brink of a climax.
(MOAN)"Don't stop," Tia began to yell.
"Not until you scream my name," Dre whispered.
Tia took a pillow to her face, to keep his name from escaping her lips. But she couldn't help it. She gripped him tighter, TIGHTER as her essence leaked from her flower. Dre felt a slight convulsion as he melted inside of her...
... In the after math, they lay nude on the sofa in weary after the experienced they shared. They had gotten their revenge but they didn't really care.
"I love you, Dre," Tia said.
"Love you too,"Dre told her.
As the scene fades out Dre realizes now what he had been missing in the action. The valuable item called protection....
A contest entry
- Erotica... Turn Me On and You'll Get Points. If I Don't, Nothing. So Make it Good. Prewrites Allowed. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
100 points, ended February 24, 2007, 7 entries
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You really should try to finish this series... it's really good
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(blown away...) i don't even really know what to say to this. the intensity was incredible. i was drawn into ever line, disappointed though when it ended lol. you did a great job writing this part. the ending was my favorite part, foreshadowing what could happen next. i love it! it keeps me zoned in wanting to read more...i can't wait to read the following parts..


beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


