Never Ending Nightmere

My brothers and I are siting at home fort. In a house, it's a pretty big one, nice size den that we are working in. I am at the computer typing up our stratagy plans. And my brothers are scattered throughout the room. They are telling me what to write and we are adding and changing things quite often as we go through it all. 1

"Annaleen, you saved a copy of that on the hard drive right,asked Josh. 2

Yup, its under mydocuments. The file itself is called groceries.html,I answered. 3

He jess looked at me questioningly and then turned away. I could tell by the look in his eyes that he wasn't at all sure about what we were about to do. It was going to be one of the biggest drug deals to ever hit the streets of a big town in Wisconsin. 4

Our location would be an old abandoned warehouse located in the vacant part of West Allis Milwaukee. This is where we had figured would be the most non findable getup. And I thought it was pretty well abandoned that no one would really ever think of looking there. 5

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As I started to pack up the last of the gear I was going to need. Josh and Munchies started to put their guns together and make sure they were all loaded and ready to go. And then they got their knives and put them in their socks on the right feet, so that all they had to do was kick up their feet and they had easy access to a whole nother wheapon. They were ready to go. All they needed to do was pick up the 4 million dollars that they had on reserve with the West Allis Police Department. They were ready but not sure of themselves. 7

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Come on you two, lets scoot,said Josh. 9

Okay right behind ya bro,replied Munchie. 10

As we all reached outside and loaded up into our cheap lil ghetto cruiser which was a '92 Chevy Cavilier, 4 door, painted teal. We really began doubting if we should be helping out the cops that would jess love to throw all three of our asses into jail jess for this kinda behavior. They said if we helped them they would reduce our probation sentence to a lot less. But first we had to successfully pull off this deal. 11

This was gonna be one of the fewest drugbusts in Milwaukee County that was going to end up wrong. By wrong I mean all the planning we did, all the practicing we did all of everything backfired in our faces. 12

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It was no more then 10 mins after I took my position up on the roof top of the warehouse next to the one that my brothers were silently waiting for our associates in. They stood there in the dark awaiting my words. When I gave them the heads up that we had company coming our way and they were coming fast, they began to prepare for what would be prolly the very last involvement they would ever have with crime. 14

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As the others entered into the warhouse, Josh standing alone there in the dark looking at them, Munchie flipped on the lights so that he could get a good look at him and know who would be responsibe for this whole mess. I sat up on the roof taking all the pictures I could, making sure that I could prove who was the ring leader of the whole operation before allowing them to get away with such a horrible crime. 16

"Do you have the money,"asked the ring leader. 17

Yes, all of it, you can count it if you would like to. It's okay by me., answered Josh. 18

So he counted it and it was all there and he was about to make the switch when he heard loud and clear, The place is surrounded, everyone come out with their hands on top of their heads,"Said the voice from outside. 19

Josh and Munchie headed for the door, they left everything there and were trying to get out of that warehouse before the cops buzzed that whole place up and down. 20

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By the time everything had been figured out, my brothers figured out they had been set out on a set up. And they weren't about to go back to jail due to some crocked cops. So they ran. I stayed where I was and they both ran. 22

They reached home fort about an hour or so later and had managed tohide pretty safely from the cops and by doing so they had managed to stay alive jess a lil longer. 23

But it wasn't long after I jumped from the roof into a pile of garbage and then headed for the ghetto car, did the cops turn from them onto me. Which I was okay with, I was buying them a lil more time and I knew that they could use it almost more then n e thing. 24

So they pulled my over adn took the addy of my liscence and went to pick up my brothers. Since they already had me the brains of the operation they only needed them to make sure they had all the details right. Which they did. 25

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Several moments later they bust into the house and they try to arrest Josh and Munchie. Between the two of them they tear our a can of whoop ass on the cops. And knock them unconsceince which was long enough for them to escape. So they made it else where and i sat behind bars. All I had to do was give thier names and I would be free, but I couldn't sink that low and rat on my brothers. 27

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  • November 22, 2006
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    wow that was a very good story. i really enjoyed it. and its very noble for her not to rat out her bros. i love your writing