What I Say

What would you say?
If I told you to,
Take all the barriers down?
Would you walk away?
Or hold me a little closer?
What would you say?
If I whished upon,
Ever single star.
And every single wish,
Was made for you?
What would you say?
If I stopped trying?
Would you come after me?
Or go back to sleep?
What would you say?
If I told you,
That I may not be perfect,
But I still want you to love me,
No matter what I may say.

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  • jtnbuck
    January 9, 2007
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    i really did like this it was so good.great job and happy writting to u in the future


  • BrokenDawn
    January 3, 2007
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    I really, really liked it it was kinda sad sorta but i loved the message!! Ya super job!!!

  • DustyOldHalo
    December 27, 2006

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    Wonderful! Just sad enough to hold me til the end.

    It's sounds as if it stems from real life experience?

  • TheCoffeeGod
    December 21, 2006

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    Aw, great job! Whats it about, or was it just for the contest? Well, either way i like it. <3 love ya


  • VioletStrike
    December 21, 2006
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    This was really sweet! I loved it so much! Good job. Kudos!

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