The Blood Red Moon (Part 3)

She was shocked that he asked such a question after what had just happened. "My name is Snow," she replied softly. No one had ever cared to ask what her name was before. Everyone had always just called her Loser Girl or they said she was a nobody. "Well Snow i would like to be your friend if thats ok with you, i mean." He said as he helped her to her feet. She thought for a moment before answering," I'd like that." She smiled at him and he returned her smile and nodded. He looked so dreamy she couldn't take her eyes off him. But after a few minutes he took her arm and told her to follow. She did as he asked and ran with him into a wooded area. She had never been in the woods before. It was scary but also peaceful. "Where are we going?" Snow asked 10 minutes later when they were deep in the forest. "You'll see. Just follow me." Nathan answered as he ran a little ahead of her. About 5 minutes later he stopped and held out his arm to stop her. "Stay here i'll be right back. Stay down." Nathan wispered. He stepped out into a clearing with a small village in its center and a castle in the very middle of it.

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  • DarkOneShadow
    October 28, 2007

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    This is getting interesting... I like the way that the plot is going... it's almost surreal, but then again all good adventures are... good job

    DarkOne


  • black-hearts
    March 19, 2007
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    it verry good

    i like your way with words, I'd like to read more


  • beezy92
    December 21, 2006
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    oooo

    very interesting! im intrigued!


  • QueenWolf
    December 19, 2006
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    your story is hard to read could you please change it

    Penny